英文修改

revise vt revised,revising 校阅；校订 He was revising what he had written. 他正在修改他所写的东西. 修正；改变 I'll have to revise my ideas about Tom. 我必须改变对汤姆的看法. Modify 更改；修改 The equipment may be modified to produce VCD sets. 这设备可以经过改装用来生产光碟机. 缓和；减轻；使易接受 to modify one's demands 使达成协议 修饰,限制（意义） Adjectives modify nouns. 形容词修饰名词.

楼主你写的好Chinglish哦。偶帮你全修改过了，希望能帮助你。Welcome to Putian. It is located at the center of the Fujian province which is a beautiful city with over three million people.I have heard from Sam that its population is more than the Dallas` in US. However, Putian can only be called a small city in China because there are many cities which are much bigger than it. Putian is similar to any other cities in China because more and more large modern buildings are being built. Also,it has many natural and cultural sceneries. Firstly, all the newcomers should visit the Meizhou island which is the hometown of the sea goddess Mazu. There are also many beautiful temples for Mazu. This is the statue of Mazu and it is 14 matters tall. That is an endless expense of golden beaches. Last term, all of our classmates went there. We chased each other on the beach and played with the seawater. We had a good time .

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变更是换掉，修改是稍微改变

变更：change or alter 变更是指根本性的变化修改：correct or modify 而修改是指在食物原来的基础上加以改动

Welcome to Putian . Putian is in the center of Fujian province. It is a beautiful city with over three million people.I have heard from Sam that its population is larger than that of Dallas in the US. However, Putian can just be considered as a small city in China since there are many bigger cities. More and more big and modern buildings that are under construction just like other cities in China. Besides, there are many natural and cultural sceneries. Please allow me to show them to you .First, for every newcomer, he or she should not miss visiting the Meizhou island. Meizhou island is the hometown of the sea goddess Mazu. There are many beautiful temples for Mazu. This is the statue of Mazu,and it is 14 metres high. The gold beach is boundless. Last term all of our classmates went there. We chased each other on the beach and we played water in the sea. We had a good time .

修改什么？一般文字，图画可以用FIX,RECTIFY，REVISE，MODIFY.如果是正式的文案，法律等等，应该是AMEND如果你的“修改”有更换之意，则应该用CHANGE一般来讲，用MODIFY比较普遍，FIX比较口语，AMEND比较正式