写作思路：写作时从大处着手，尽量阐述自己的看法或者思想，全面详细的解答问题，并且紧扣问题的中心，把要表达的内容完整表述出来。
i am li ming, a second year student in the education department of ouf university. i"m writing to inform you of the true conditions of our canteen service.
i don"t know how to begin my account because the service is really bad. please read my letter patiently and do something about it. we would be grateful for whatever you do for us students.
firstly, the quality of the food is bad. for instance, the rice is too hard. what"s more, some dishes are not fresh sometimes. as a matter of fact, the poor food has already caused some stomach problems among the students.
secondly, the service is not good enough. some staff members give us short measure when they are in a bad mood. now and then they behave like robbers, robbing you of your appetite. worst of alit they never smile.
thirdly, the price is too high. a small cake made from rice and dates cost as much as 0.6 yuan! it will cost us a good 6 yuan to fill our stomach with such cakes. after all we are poor students.
i wish my opinion would call your attention to the canteen service on campus. we are badly in need of your help.
looking forward to an early reply.
我是李明，一个二年级的学生在教育部门ouf大学。我写信是想告诉你我们的餐厅服务的真实条件。
我不知道如何开始我的帐户，因为服务是非常糟糕的。请耐心阅读我的信，请做点什么。我们会感激你为我们做的学生。
首先，食物的质量是不好的。例如，米饭太硬。更重要的是，有时一些菜不新鲜。事实上，穷人食品已经导致一些胃病在学生中。
其次，服务不够好。一些工作人员给我们短测量时心情不好。然后他们像强盗，抢劫你的食欲。最糟糕的下车他们从不微笑。
第三，价格太高了。一个小蛋糕由大米和日期成本高达0.6元！它将花费我们一个好的6元填填肚子吧这样的蛋糕。毕竟我们是贫困学生。
我希望我的意见能提醒您注意校园的食堂服务。我们急需你的帮助。
期待早日答复。
八旗子弟搓天下
