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It was 5 years after the end of the Snow White’s story. I was working in my office when someone knocked at my door. "Come in, please," I said. A fat woman whose skin was as pale as snow came in and took off her hat. She turned to me,"Hello, Mr.Freud. My name is Snow White." "Hello, Ms.Snow White. Take a seat, please," I said, "What happened to you?" "I...uh..." Snow White became embarrassed. Her face was a little bit red. "I just can't stop overeating. I feel uneasy if nothing is in my mouth. In this way, I became so fat that my husband treated me more and more coldly" She said. "Ms.Snow White, take it easy," I said,"In my opinion, your ego is not strong to keep your id down. You always want to feel good, and do whatever you want, right?" "Yes. I think I need more control. By the way," Snow White took out a cigarette case, staring at me,and asked me,"Can I smoke here?" "No, I'm afraid not." I replied and pointed at the sign: "No smoking". "All right. May I chew gum?" said Snow White. She put cigarette case back and put a piece of gum in her mouth. "Listen!! I think you are orally fixated. During an oral stage starting from an 18-month babe, the only pleasure is from the mouth. Though you are not at that stage, you fail to resolve such conflicts. After then, you may constantly 'hunger' for mouth-related activities," I said and had some water. "What can I do? Mr.Freud," said Snow White. She became nervous. "Every time when you feel hungry, tell yourself you are full and try focus on something else." I advised. "I'll try. Thank you so much!" said Snow White. "May you feel better soon!" I said, smiling on her. Snow White left.

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Dear Kate，亲爱的凯特， Thank you for your (修改过）Email.Now I would like to tell you something about the extracurricular reading in our school. 谢谢你给我的来信。现在，我将想要告诉你一些关于我们在学校之外的课外阅读。 In my opinion,playing computer games not only takes much time but also made me not very health(修改过）. But in this age，the(修改过） information and communication, play （修改过）the computer is an important role extremely （副词放后面）. 在我的观点里，玩电脑游戏不只是浪费时间，但是，也必须要说的是，它有损于我的健康。在我这样的年纪，信息和沟通，电脑是一个主要的途径。 Fortunately,reading is my favorite hobby . I (never不用加，can) never stop to read about love (修改了，这样说比较的合适）Because I don't like it.As we know ,books will give you a wide of knowledge.( 众所周知，读书将会使你博学多才） （后一句没什么必要写，我删除了）。 还好，阅读是我最喜欢的爱好。我从不来不读关于爱情的书，因为我对它不感兴趣。我们都知道，读书将会使你博学多才。 So I think that it was read books a good for our study and life . (修改了） 所以，我想要在我的学习和生活里多阅读书籍。 BR 致尊敬的 Tom 汤姆（修改了） 11/12/2014(日期都要反过来写）