1.因为我的性格很开朗,喜欢孩子并且有爱心,也很喜欢教育工作. Because my disposition is very unclouded and bright,I like chlidren and have compassion .And also I like the education work very much. (却主语)2.你觉得自己是否能胜任幼儿教师的工作? Do you think whether you can be competented the babyteacher’s work ? (疑问句形式不会!!!被动不对)3.我想我可以,或许我没有太多的教学经验,但是通过我的努力我相信我能胜任. I think I can ,perhaps I haven’t too much experience of education,but I believed that I can be competented. (experience不可数,句子与句子之间要有连词)5.我会多与孩子沟通,让她们感觉学校也是家,并向有经验的老师学习,沟通如何教孩子们等等. I will communicate with children ,and let them fell that the school is also a family.Then I wil studies to experienced teachers. 6.如果你没被录取,你会怎么办? If you have not be enrolled, how can you do?