写作思路:要直接简化任务语言。在叙述中,我们要把直接叙述变成间接叙述,尽可能简化人物语言。这样,即使情节连贯,又使语句“简练”。
This is my room.It's big and clean.There is a big bed in my room.There is a schoolbag on the chair.There is a dictionary on the desk. And there is a pair of glasses on the TV.Look at the photo.It's on the wall. I like my room.
译文:
这是我的房间。它又大又干净。我的房间里有一张大床。椅子上有一个书包。桌子上有一本字典。电视上有一副眼镜。看这张照片。它在墙上。我喜欢我的房间。