语法上好多错误（特别多comma slice,就是该分新句子的时候本该用period却用了comma)。例如，It was the best of time, it was the worst of time, it was the age of faith and eagerness , it was the age of academic freedom. 这是四句话，必须4个句号。非要写在一起的话It was the best of time and also the worst of time. ( best of time?? best time??)It was the age of faith and eagerness and also the age of academic freedom.再比如这个It was the best of time, because of academic freedom , (that) Countless of famous faculties, remarkable scholars and brilliant scientists have（had?) emerged and gone through the current of time. (It was the best of time, )because of academic freedom , (that) the campuses of universities became a sacred place where these thirsty minds could pursuit for knowledge and truth , a peaceful place where different opinions could exist in harmony, (and) a righteous place where upright professors and honest students could stand up and call on peace and democracy out of their conscience and patriotic hearts.（我跳着读的，中间自己想办法吧）In the year 1949 像这种东西直接in 1949更好听In 1949， the communists founded (P)eople (R)epublic of (C)hina , once they did give us citizens hope. (However,) it was a hope consisted of lies and falsehoods , and the truth is that China has never enjoyed real academic freedom （true academic freedom? real是指现实的) since 1949, not even during (the) more recent decades in which the government has carried out economic reform.（逻辑上是不是怪怪的，since 1949就代表到现在，干嘛还要not even，但非要强调的话 .... ）(这也是很严重的语法错误）(With) No more thoughtful students , we are all forced to have too many brain-washing courses. (With )No more creativity scholars, they are all pretty busy plagiarizing academic theories....或者这样可能好听点，Without thoughtful students any more, we are all forced...还有小错误像creativity scholars,应该是creative scholars.这样小错误我没有一个个看，你自己认真检查吧But I do believe, although I don't expect to have the opportunity to witness, that this situation will be changed （。）The brightness of liberalization will once again light up the path,（and） academic freedom will once again shepherd us through the valley of darkness , as long as we still have conscience and faith.感觉这篇文章完全是用中国语法写的。英文句子要想写的好听，长句子是必然要的，但更要注意有长有短，比如2长一短，这样读起来会比较流畅。PS:很多句子我都跳过了没读
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