英语描述地图

FROM it ,we can see the shape of our motherland and where she lies.we can also see our neighbor,and the sea around,and the rivers inside our country,mountains that we've heard for a long time.So, it is very useful.写得相当不好了，请指教。

map：a diagrammatic representation of the earth's surface (or part of it)望采纳！您的采纳就是对我们最大的支持！美丽心情团队感谢您！O(∩_∩)O谢谢

我大概帮你组织了一下语言然后比较简单的改了改，你看看，有问题可以给我留言。Now, I would like to talk about a Map .I am from BaoDing. When I go to school in Tianjin, I have to take bus because there is no train between these two cities .To get Tianjin, I should take the Jin-Bao high-speed bus , and get off the bus at ChenChang street, walk along ChenChang street about 8KM and turn left, then go ahead on GuangRong road and I will find the school on right.The place next to our school is XiGu park and DingZiGu bus station. Sometimes, I go to BinJiang street for shopping . I often go to there by subway,because the HongHuLi subway station is just 500 meter away form our school . I exit from YingKouDao station later. If you want buy some fried twist (麻花吧，可以说 bread twist 或者 fried twist) for your parents you can get off the subway at NanLou station. Last week I took（这里应该用过去式，因为是last week） NO.855 bus at DingZiGu bus station and got off at the BaLiTai station, And I noticed （这里用notice比较好）the TianJin and NanKai university are right there.Tianjing is so big that I just have been to few places (few places 在这里指的是没几个地方) And I wish I can travel all around Tianjin.That’s all,thank you!

现在,我将讨论一幅地图,我来自保定因为那里不会有火车和天津之间保定,所以我不得不坐公车到我们学校如果我想我应该以达到销往Jin-Bao高速、道路thengo直走ChenChang街。随着ChenChang街约拿八公里左转。以GuangRong路,我就发现我们的学校在我的右边。 我们学校的地方是XiGu公园和DingZiGu汽车站有时候,我去滨江街去逛街我经常乘地铁去那儿,我校只是500米远的地方,HongHuLi地铁站和lexve从出口YingKouDao站,如果你想买一些Mahua对你的父母,你可以在NanLou站下车…上周我带NO.855 DingZiGu公共汽车站下车,BaLiTai车站,我找到了天津和南开大学。 天津是如此之大,我就去了很少的地方。 所有的,谢谢!

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