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Avoiding Sentence Fragments A sentence is defined as a group of words containing a subject, a verb, and a complete thought. If any of these elements is missing, then the group of words isn‘t a sentence. A fragment is a group of words that is punctuated like a sentence and that is trying to function as a sentence, but one of the necessary elements is missing.There are several ways to find and correct fragments. Any group of words functioning as a sentence should be checked for the basics. Does it have a subject? Does it have a verb? Does it start with a subordinating conjunction or a relative pronoun that keeps the thought from being complete? If the answer to any of the questions is no, it is a fragment.Correcting fragments is fairly simple and you have several options. For a fragment that is missing a subject or verb, add the missing element. If the problem is a subordinating conjunction, the conjunction can be removed which would make the fragment a complete sentence. Another option is to join the fragment to another sentence either before it or after it in the paragraph creating a complex sentence.No matter how you choose to correct the fragment, it is important for you to eliminate them from your writing. Fragments are considered to be a major grammatical error in writing because they indicate that the writer isn‘t sure what a sentence is. Readers will often not pay attention to the point a writer is making if the reader thinks the writer doesn‘t even understand how to write a complete sentence.

How to balance Job responsibilities and personal interestsAt this moment, with the internet widely used between people, many working ways are get more and more popular. One of the ways is the "Work from home", which means to work at home some time. This is surely an efficient way for the following aspect. First, it saves the commuting time. Second, it is a flexible way to balance work and home. For example, one might have something to deal with in the morning, but he doesn't need to take a half day off, since he could start working after he finished his issue until night. It allows him to arrange time more flexibly. Via the telephone, webchat, email and video meetings , his workmates could access him at any time at any place.

Oline Shopping With the development of the internet , we enter the information age and most people have their own computers . So online shopping become a part of our lives gradually and more and more popular among us .Why online shopping is so attractive that some youth can hardly continue their lives without it? As far as I am concerned, there are several reasons which lead to it so popular . At first, goods online are far cheaper than that in stores. Sometimes, the price of a commodity online is even half of that in stores. Secondly, there are lots of goods online which include all aspects of life . You can find anything , as long as you can imagine, such as computer, TV, books, cell phone and so on. Thirdly, we can compare one product to another much more easily . If you want to buy one thing with a reasonable price , you have to visit many stores , which is quite tired .Because of so many advantages of online shopping , we like purchase things in this way.However, although online shopping makes our lives more convenient, it also has some problems . As we know, online shopping is trade that complete on internet , which cause it not safe enough. We purchase a good when we even don't know who is the seller, whether he is liar, and whether the quality of the goods are so well as he promised. In addition, our money in online bank may be stolen by Haker . What's more, suppose the product is broken after we use it a period, we can't get it repaired in time .In a word , online shopping has its strengths and weaknesses. I advise everybody to treat it carefully. If you want to buy something, you'd better choose those online stores with good reputation and see customers' remarks on products. I suggest that you go to real supermarket or shop to buy products which are expensive or big .At last, I wish everyone has a good experience of online shopping .