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A few days ago, the teacher asked us a question: "classmates, what makes you most can not stand, will make you anger to the extreme? " The students speak out the itch for a try, in my opinion, the answer.
Lonely said: " mom went out to play with my mother and me, scold me is the most unbearable for me, makes me angry to the extreme! " The teacher nodded, smiled and gestured for her to sit down.
Ming Qing said: " when I saw my dad and mom held my brother and sister, and I will be jealous, then, is more than I can bear, the anger! " The teacher smiled and said: " well, very honest! "
There was a lot of people express their opinions. When the teacher smiled and called up in the seat for me, the students are invariably to look to me.
My little head, thought for a moment, then raised his head, the teacher the smiling eyes, unhurried ground says: " I personally think, loss of freedom or being betrayed all other I can not stand, or even anger to the extreme! "
The teacher approvingly nodded at me, her smiling eyes, imperceptibly, smile has more strong. The classmates are all surprised to be Agape and tongue-tied, terrified, a long time to say a word.
Loss of freedom and being betrayed??? Until now I still wonder, what is forcing me to say the words?
Some students may think I silly, right? However, the time should not be from a pupil to the spoken word, seems quite reasonable, even do not have a flavor!