1. No one could understand me alone 是副词，在这里修饰动词 understand 了，意思成了“没有人能够单独地懂得我”。 understand 后应该改动如下： 宾语从句—— undestand that I am alone (或者lonesome) and gentle. 直接宾语—— undestand my loneliness and gentleness2. I tender, tender 侧重于脆弱，形容词最好用gentle，名词用 gentleness。3. I am weak, weak 意思是虚弱，表示身体欠佳，如果用形容词，改为 effeminate，名词则用 effeminacy4. because I pretended to pretend to be strong. 1）两个 pretend 意思重复，删除一个； 2）改为进行时态 because I am pretending to be strong整体修改如下： 第一种：现在时态 * No one can undestand that I am alone , gentle and effeminate, because I am pretending to be strong. * No one can undestand my loneliness, my gentleness and my effeminacy, because I am pretending to be strong. 第二种：过去时态 * No one could undestand that I was alone , gentle and effeminate, because I was pretending to be strong. * No one could undestand my loneliness, my gentleness and my effeminacy, because I was pretending to be strong.
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