This month, I will travel to Changsha and Zhangjiajie with my two friends, which is supposed to be a seven-day trip. We will set out on 10th, June.
这个月,我要和我的两个朋友一起去长沙和张家界旅行,为期7天左右。我们会在6月10日出发。
Now, we have prepared many things, snacks and medicines included. Firstly, we will go to Changsha by plane. The tickets are cheap, so it’s a good choice to save time.
We will stay there for two days. The main goal staying there is to enjoy the delicious food in Changsha. My friend has prepared a map of must-tries and I believe they must be good. Then we will go to Zhangjiajie by train. It’s not so far from Changsha, taking about five hours to get there.
1、 文字要连贯。 除了要用 however, and 等连词外,遇到并列的事情时,要用“in the first place?? in the second place?? the last but not least important??”这样的连接词。否则 不得分!用“in the first place”代替“firstly”可增加很多字数。
2、 采用高级的句式。 如主语+插入语+谓语+宾语:Nanning, my hometown, is??. Native to China, Panda is lovely. 又如:Can I send you the money via web? Since my university, which is located in Nanning, is far away from the down town area, and I’m fully occupied by studies. (英国人都恨不得把所有的信息在一句话里说完。
Last summer I went to Vietnam with my parents. We stayed at a small village outside Saigon. The air and water was very clean and there were many kids playing in the mud along with water buffalos. Though it’s a very poor country, the kids seem to be happy. They live with their farmer parents in little houses built with dirt and straw and help out a lot in the rice field during the day. They don’t have TVs or Internet, but they enjoy a lot playing outside. It was a very memorable trip that I will never forget.99 单词。
Last summer I went to Guilin with my parents .We visited Lijiang by boat.The weather was very clean and we could see a lot of fishes in the river.We also climbed the hills.The trees on the hills were very green.We had a good time and felt happy.Guilin is one of the most beautiful cities in our country .The people of Guilin are friendly.I love Guilin very much.纯属原创!