share改成sharing就对了连词数量假设是n 谓语数量就是n+1本句连词:1.It is absurd that 中的that 2.one person who hasn't 中的who3.think (that) sharing it with 中的被省略掉的that4.govenment and think 中的and有4个连词 故有5个谓语is / hasn't contributed to /gains/think/means share多余故改为非谓语形式sharing具有名词词性作means的主语做主语的非谓语形式只有-ing/to do 本句不表示目的 故不用todo 故用-ing
It is absurd that one person who hasn't contributed to the society gains money from the government and thinks that sharing it with friends means to own personal loyalty.改过的地方:1. ...gains money from the government... govenment应该是government,然后前面要加个the. 2. ...and thinks that sharing it... think 要加个s,因为是跟gains并列的嘛。然后thinks后面要加that sharing it with friends来做think后面的宾语从句的主语。3....means to own personal loyalty....means own中间要加个to,让to own做means的宾语。或者如果你的句子里面不是一定要加own这个次的话,直接说means personal loyalty 就很地道了。望采纳