⑤对比: in the same way(同样地),just as(正如), on the onehand…on the ther hand(一方面……另一方面……)等。
相似的比较:similarly, in the same manner
相反的比较:on the other hand,conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary,compared with …,
5.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。如:
〔原文〕A new railway is being built in my hometown.
〔修正〕A new railway is under construction in my hometown.
6.避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如:
〔原文〕I like reading while my brother likes watching television.
〔修正〕I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
I like reading while watching television appeals to my brother.
三、结尾
1、All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that……(比如说到和谐社会All in
al,what really matters is, in fact, that we should build our society a harmonios
society.)
2、Therefore, it’s not difficult to draw a conclusion that……
3、As a result , we should take effective measures to do sth.(我们必须采取
一些有效的措施来做些什么)
4、 From what has been discussed above , we may conclude that ……
5、 Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good maners。arise from politeness and respect for others.
Directions: This part is to test your ability to do practical writing. You are required to write a letter based on the following information given in Chinese. Remember to do your writing on the Translation/Composition Sheet.
I am writing to ask for information about training courses in automobile repair that your Vocation Repair Center offers. I enjoy working with cars and would like to train to be a mechanic.
I would like to take the course from September to December but I can only study in the evenings because I have a full?time learning course in my college.
I would appreciate if you send me details and an application form.