英语短文改错三篇

一、Before he was a teacher, Bob told me what(改为that或者去掉what) hewould like to be a lawyer when he was at school.(本行没有错误)He worked very hard at his lessons and tried(此处加to)enter into(去掉into) a famous university, but somethingunhappy happened in his family, that(改为which) made it necessary for him to working(改为work) for a living.As a young man, he had been a bus driver, a salesman. （本行也没有错误）But he spends(改为spent) his spare time studyingand finally became(此处加a) college teacher. "Youngpeople," he often said, "(此处加are)full of wishes andhopes after they step into the society."二、May I have（此处加your） attention, please? I have a fewthings to tell you. When you have a class here in the (此行没有错误)language lab, please be here a little early(改为earlier). Changeyour shoes(加and) enter the lab. Don’t bring anythinghere except your textbooks. When you are into(改为in),please don't touch these machine(改为machines) without permission.Always do as the teacher tell(改为tells) you to. In class youshould only speak the(去掉the) English, not Chinese, Recorderscan be used(此处加to) make a copy of the listening materials.When class(此处加is) over, turn off your machines and leavethe lab one by one.三、A farmer goes to the nest of his goose and find there(此处加is)an egg all yellow and bright. When he takes it up, (此行无错误)it is heavy and he is going to throw it about(改为away),because he thinks it (此处加a)trick to him. But he takes it homeat last, and soon finds that it is an egg of golden(改为gold).Every morning (此处加the)same thing happens, and he soonbecomes rich because he sells his eggs. As he grew(改为grows)rich, he grows greedy, and thinks to get (to get应改为of getting)all at once all thegold in the geese(改为goose’s) body. So he kills it and opens it onlyto find everything(改为nothing) inside.应该是没问题的，我做改错题还是很有把握的哦。祝您学业进步！

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Yesterday li Ming and I took ①【a去掉】 part in an outdoor camping activity, We got up as ②【earlier 改为early】as possible ③【but改为and】 put on strong and comfortable shoes. Then ④【they 改为we】headed for a hill with some food in the bags. ⑤【When去掉，或改为On/Upon】reaching the top, we saw a direction mark, ⑥【that改为which】 told us the position of the campsite. Down the hill. we ⑦【come不知道这个是你打错了还是原文就是这样，反正应该是came】 to a river but didnt know how to cross it. Suddenly I came up ⑧【加上with】an idea. We ut our bags on a board and swam in the water ⑨【push改为pushing】 the board. After getting to the other ⑩【ba"ks改为bank】, we alkerl for half an hour (11)【unless 改为until】we arrived at the destination. We spent the night there.你打字错了不少，有些明显的就没当错来改，可⑦不明确，所以一共是十一个，如果⑦原文是came,是你打错了，那么⑤就是错的。

Yesterday li Ming and I took * part in an outdoor camping activity, We got up as **early as possible ***and put on strong and comfortable shoes. Then ****we headed for a hill with some food in the bags. When reaching the top, we saw a direction mark, *****which told us the position of the campsite. Down the hill. we ******came to a river but didnt know how to cross it. Suddenly I came up an idea. We ******put our bags on a board and swam in the water ********pushing the board. After getting to the other ba"ks, we ******spent for half an hour ********until we arrived at the destination. We spent the night there. 请见带星号的标示，希望可以帮到你！

best friend (for) many years 介词搭配错误didn't think her friend (would)mind it 时态一致her friend did seem to (had) minded it 时态Therefore改为However 连词She stopped (visting) her 去掉visiting前的to 动词固定搭配was such (a) mean woman 冠词She was (truely) sorry 副词(words) really mean a lot 名词复数(we) should really think twice 前后主语不一致in order not to (hurt) 固定搭配

1.第一行，of去掉2.第二行。will改为would，3.therefore改为however。4.第四行。such后加一个a.5.第五行。true改为truely.6.第六行，word改为words。7.第七行，you改为we。8.hurting改为hurt。我只找到这么多。

1、第一行：took a part in，删除a。2、第一行 as earlier as 改为early 3、第二行but put on改为and put on。4、第二行Then they headed for 改为Then we headed for 。5、第二行a hill 改为the hill 6、第三行 that told us 改为which told us 。7、第四行we come to 改为came to。8、第四行 I came up 改为 I came up with 9、第五行 push the board改为pushing 10、 第六行unless改为until