专四英语作文分析

It can be noticed that there are some unhealthy living habits among young people, especially college students. Typical examples include staying up late, being addicted to games, consuming in an inappropriate way. Thus, due attention should be paid to students’ daily habits.

Apparently, these bad habits may generate negative impacts. To begin with, they may impair students’ physical health and psychological fitness. In addition, what worries many teachers is that they may also exert negative influences on students’ academic performance. To conclude, never can we turn a blind eye to these phenomena.

In view of the seriousness of this issue, it is time that we took effective measure. Firstly, it is suggested that universities or colleges should cultivate students’ awareness of healthy living. Secondly, students themselves are well-advised to learn to regulate and control their own life appropriately. Only by doing so, can we hope to see the ideal scenes in which students enjoy their colorful and healthy life in Ivory Tower.

Views on donating blood vary from person to person. Some people think that it is glorious to donate blood. They hold this view because the blood they have donated can be used to save the patients who are in urgent need of it. But others hold that it is foolish for people to donate blood. In their opinion, blood is very precious to one’s health and if one loses 200ml or more of blood, it will do harm to his or her health.

As for me, I agree to the first opinion. The reasons for my choice are as follows. First, while it is true that loss of too much blood is dangerous to one’s health, it doesn’t mean donating a little blood is also harmful. Doctors tell us that donating a little blood is of no harm to anyone in good health and blood plays an indispensable role in saving a seriously ill patient.

In a word, I am convinced that donating blood is glorious. As new-century college students, we are supposed to donate blood as long as our health permits. Nothing can make us happier than saving a person.

In recent years, more and more college students quit school ahead of schedule.Except the minority quitting for objective reasons like health problem,most students leave with the pursuit of an ideal career, as well as more experience and fortune.Several factors may contribute to its emergence.

In the first place, some students think that the opportunity cost of spending four years on college campus is too high,and the job market competition is getting fiercer.

Therefore, when there’s a satisfying job available, it’s worth quitting.In the second place, some hold that the real world is a better school for them to get practical knowledge than traditional schools.

Last but not least, the publicizing and popularity of some successful businessmen like Bill Gates and Steve Jobs,who didn’t finish school but ended up with a great fortune and achievement,set examples for the young generation emphasizing individuality and personality.

However, I don’t think it’s rational for college students to quit school.Armed with high education and more mature personality, better-prepared graduates can fight for their future more easily.

In a word, college education pays off.

专四写作便条范文解析

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一、TEM4便条的基本要求

(一) 格式(format)正确TEM4便条的格式与普通英文书信格式基本相同。

具体来说，它应有日期(date)、称呼 (saluwfion)、正文(body)及结尾(ending)，结尾包括结尾套语(complimentary close)和签名(signature)。

1.日期指写便条的日期。英文便条与汉语便条的日期写的地方有别，前者的日期一般写在便条的右上角，偶尔也见写在便条的左上角，而后者的日期则写在便条的右下角，即写在签名的下面。英文日期与汉语日期的写法也有不同，汉语一般先写年，然后再写月、日，而英文则一般把年份写在月、日的后面。另外，英文日期的月、日与年之间通常用逗号隔开。例如，2008年4月21日通常写成April 21，2008或April 21 st，2008;当然，由于是非正式书信，也可以去掉年份，写成Ap l 2l或April 21st(不过，这种写法，只是最近两年才被TEM4接受)，或者写成21/4/2008或4/21/2008。日期能说明便条的有效度，没有日期，则会使人感到茫然。

2.称呼称呼是指写便条人对收便条人的称谓，一般都以Dear开头，写在日期下一两行、留出左页边空白，顶格写。TEM4试卷中一般对写便条人与收便条人之间的关系作了提示。提示中的“you”指的是写便条人，提到的另一方便是收便条人。称呼时，一般只需在其名字前加Dear即可，如 Dear Susan，Dear Tom。若此人有头衔(social title)，称呼时，便要保留其头衔，例如Dr.Herce，要称Dear Dr.Pierce，不称Dear Pierce。如果提示中的另一方是以Mrs Wang或Mr Wang出现，称呼时也只需在其前加Dear便可，即称DearMrs Wang或Dear MrWang，若只称Dear Wang则视为不妥。当对方为亲属时，在Dear 后面加上表示亲属关系大写的字眼即可，如Dear Grandpa，Dear Aunt。值得一提的是，近年来TEM4也接受不带Dear的称呼。称呼后面可用逗号，也可用冒号。

3.正文正文是写便条人要叙述或谈论的事情，是便条的主要组成部分。一般书信是在称呼下方隔两行处开始写正文。但就TEM4便条而言，一般在称呼的下一行开始写正文便可。正文的首行左边一般留约5个字母宽的空白，但也可顶格写。便条的内容简单、字数少，因此，正文一般只需写一段或两段。若有两段，第二段的首行应与第一段的首行对齐写。

4.结尾如前所述，结尾包括结尾套语和签名。

(1)结尾套语结尾套语的位置一般是在正文最后一行的下面，从便条的中央部分开始，稍向右缩进。当然，若正文的开头是往左顶格写，此时的结尾套语也应往左顶格写。开头字母要大写，末尾要用逗号。结尾套语为写便条人对收便条人的谦称或客套以示礼貌，措辞的变化按照不同的关系而定。

现分述如下：

1.致不熟悉的人，宜用较庄重的套语，如Yours sincerely，Sincerely yours，或Sincerely等。

2.对上级、长者，除了可用上述较庄重的套语，也可用Yours respectfully或Respectfully yours。

3.对一般朋友或熟人可用1.中提到的较庄重的套语语，也可用Yours等较为随便的套语。

4.对密友则采用较随便的套语为宜。例如，Yours，Love，With love，Best wishes，Best regards等等。

5.对亲属可用下列任何一种：Love，With love，All my love，Yours affectionately，Affectionately yours，Lovingly yours，Yours lovingly，Your loving son(Dad?);但对亲人，不宜用Sincerely yours~由于TEM4便条写作一般是针对考生日常生活或学习相关的事情，写作的对象一般是其朋友、老师、熟人，因此，TEM4通常只接受Yours sincerely，Sincerely yours，Sincerely，或Yours这几种结尾套语。

(2)签名即写便条人署名，位于结尾套语下，偏右。若结尾套语是往左顶格写，这时的署名也应往左顶格写。签名也由写便条人和收便条人的关系和亲疏程度而定。有时TEM4指定了写便条人的名字，签名时应采用那个名字。若无指定名字，考生也不宜用自己的真名。一般只需写名不写姓，但若用了较庄重的结尾套语，此时可签全名。

(二)内容完整一般而言，一封理想的TEM4便条应包括以下三点：

(1)写便条的原因;

(2)要告诉的事情;

(3)有关的希望、建议或要求等。便条写作提示的情况都是与人们日常生活或学习相关的事情。例如，对别人提供的帮助表示感谢，邀请朋友参观书展，因不能准时赴约而表示道歉，把信息转告给朋友等。所提示的内容就是考生要表达的'思想内容。思想内容有先后之分，要讲究其逻辑性，还得注意其完整性。生活中有些约定俗成的东西，写作时，应考虑这方面的因素。例如，写道歉信时，一般都先向对方表示歉意或内疚，同时说明发生疏忽、过失、或错误的原因，提出弥补的办法，这样有利于取得对方的谅解。现以近年一次英语专业四级考试便条写作为例加以说明：该提示是：Yesterday you failed to turn up for the appointment with your teacher，Professor Wang.Write him a note of apology and make a request for another meeting.YO u should also suggest the time for the requested meting.仔细阅读这一提示，你就会发现，第一句为第二旬所要求的道歉确定了内容;为了求得对方的谅解，获得另一次会面的机会，你就必须说明前次未能赴约见面的原因。

因此，本便条的内容必须包括以下四项：

(1)apologizing for failure to turn up for the appointment，

(2)the reason for failure to turn up，

(3)making a request for another meeting，

(4)suggesting the time for the requested meeting。其中(3)、(4)为提示中明确要求表达的内容，(1)、(2)则是根据道歉类书信特点而必须表达的内容。内容为便条写作的重头戏。写作时，切莫忽视提示中的任何信息，同时要关注交际中所需的相关信息。当然，在注意提示中的信息时，特别是首句，要注意用自己正确的语言来表达，不能完全抄提示，否则会扣分。

(三)语言得体内容和语言是一个统一体。内容抓住后，应以恰当的语言来表达。一般来说，便条的语言要简单明嘹，用词平易。当然，语言风格还应与情景一致，不同的对象，所使用的语言应有所不同。相对来说，对上级、长者、不熟悉的人的语言较为正式，对亲朋好友的语言则较为随便。不过，不管对方是谁，行文中都应体现态度诚恳礼貌。

(四)字数符合要求TEM4便条总字数(包括日期、称呼、结尾在内)的要求是约50—60个字。尽管在这数字之间还可以少l0字，或多20字，即40-80字，不过，还是篇幅适中为好，以免因显得太短或太长而扣分。二TEM4便条写作中常见的问题便条写作中常见的问题主要表现在格式、内容、语言等方面。

1.格式方面

日期部分往往被漏掉，或漏掉日期中年与月、日之间的逗号，或在日期后面加点，或按汉语的顺序写成(如2006年4月22日，写成April 22 2006;April 22，2006.;2006.5.9;其正确形式请参照前文的相应部分)，或按汉语习惯把它写在签名的下面。2.称呼未往左顶格写，或与日期同写一行;称呼后面打句号，或未打逗号或冒号。把结尾套语和签名同写一行，或漏写结尾套语，或漏掉结尾套语后面的逗号。

2.内容方面便条的内容虽简单，但漏掉必须表达的内容的情况时有发生。

例如，在前文提到的那次TEM4便条写作，考生对未赴约的原因应加以说明，可不少考生只写了如下相似内容的便条：I am very sorry for missing yesterday’s appointment，so I do hope we can mak ean other one.Sunday evening is convenient for me.W hat about you?内容方面还因理解不透，或自立标准而导致交际不成功的情况也不鲜见。还是以前文提到的那次TEM4便条写作为例，评分取样的九份答卷中就有三份类似的例子。其中一份这样写道，“I’m very glad to receive your note.About our appointment I think we can change an other time.Maybe tomorrow，1 will be fre an d stay at home all day.Ifyouarealsofreetomorrow ，you can call me at anytime.Then 1 will visit you?”该提示要写一封简短的道歉信，而这位考生的答案却与此大相径庭，信中丝毫没有流露出道歉的意念。

3.语言方面便条中的语言错误可分为理解和表达两大类，主要体现在措辞、语法、拼写等方面。

措辞不当措辞不当在这里既指一般遣词造句中出现的语言运用错误 (performance erors)，又指因未按TEM4便条测试中提供的语境遣词造句而产生的语用失误(pragmatic failures)，还指因忽视对方的社会或文化背景差异而造成的语用失误。此类问题在TEM4便条写作中相当严重。我们还是以前文提到的那次TEM4便条写作为例;鉴于篇幅，且举三例：(1) 在1 would appreciate you if you could have another meeting with me这句话中，appreciate后面的宾语不妥。只要细心的读者翻阅一下词典，就会发现appreciate(感谢)的英文释义是be grateful for(something)，若把句中的you改为it(代表后面那件事)，或把appreciate改为be grateful to，或把appreciate you改为be grateful，这句话就对了。(2)考生在便条的开头就对因病未能与王教授约会表示道歉后，接着写道：I'm anxious to make an appointment with you.而根据上下文应该是，I'm anxious to make another appointment with you(??与你另订一次约会)。(3)你(写便条人)自己因某种原因而没去赴约，况且约会的对象是你的老师，事后还要命令对方到你家来见你，或以命令的 IZl吻表示要给你打电话。象“You must come to my home”，或‘'Give me a call to discuss it further'’这类话有失礼貌，使人读后感到不舒服。

2.语法错误便条中的语法错误有多种，常见的有冠词、词性、动词的时与体、句子结构等错误。(1)冠词错误，如I'm anxious to make a(应为an)appointment with you.(2)词性错误，如I must make an apologize(正确为apology)for failing to turn up for the appointment.(3)动词的时与体等方面的错误，例如：a.If you will be(应把will be改为are)free tomorrow, we shall meet again.b.I am sorry to fail(正确为to have failed而不是tofall，因事情已发生)to turn up for the appointment yesterday.(4)句子结构错误，例如：I'm very sorry.I didn’t turn up for the appointment with you. Because my mother was seriously ill yesterday and I had to take her to see the doctor(应改为I'm very sorry I didn’t turn up for the appointment with you yesterday because my mother was seriously ill and I had to take her to see the doctor).

3.拼写错误与别的主观题一样，便条写作中拼写错误数见不鲜。例如：professor---,profesor/profesor;convenient-* conveint/convinen~convinient; recejve—} recieve; appointment ---~apointment/pointment.

二、常见模板

1.邀请便条：

(1)发出邀请

发出邀请a

April 20, 2008

Dear Fiona,

I am going to hold a dinner party with several other friends of ours. The party will be held in Room 6 of Lijing Hotel at 5:00 p.m. today, I sincerely hope you can attend and we will have a very happy time together. Please let me know whether you can make it.

Yours,

Amelia

发出邀请b

April 20, 2008

Dear Fiona,

Here is a piece of good news for you. The * will give a performance in the * tomorrow evening. I am sure that you will be happy to watch it .The performance will begin at seven o’clock sharp. I will wait for you at the theater entrance. Please let me know whether you can make it at your earliest convenience.

发出邀请c

April 20, 2008

Dear Professor Zhou,

I am Amelia from class 052; I need you to give me some suggestion on my project. If it doesn’t trouble you too much, shall we have a meet at your office tomorrow? Time is up to you.

Respectful yours,

Amelia

发出邀请d(通知)

April 20, 2008

Dear girls and boys in Class 0403,

This Saturday evening, from 7 p.m. to 9 p. m., at Singeing dining hall, there will be a ball held by Class 0301. We warmly invite you to take part in it. There you can enjoy yourselves with dance, music and various games. And we’ll have a chance of communication, which will enhance the friendship between us. Come and enjoy ourselves together.

Yours, Mike

Monitor of Class 0301

(2)接受邀请

April 20, 2008

Dear Amelia,

It’s so kind of you to invite me to the dinner party, I would like to come. I will go to the place right after I finish my work at about 5 p.m. this evening. (如果是办在家里：I shall be very happy to call at your house right after I finish my work at 6:30 this evening.) Thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and I am looking forward to seeing you soon.

Yours,

Fiona

(3)拒绝邀请

April 20, 2008

Dear Amelia，

It’s so kind of you to invite me to the dinner party, I would like to but I have a meeting to attend this evening, please give my best regards to them all and I hope my absence will not cause you any serious inconvenience, have fun.

Yours, Amelia

2.请假条

April 20, 2008

Dear Ms. Jiang,

I am terribly sorry that I shall be unable to attend this morning two periods of English Class (I‘m terribly sorry to apply for ten days’ leave from the Aug. 23rd to Sep. 3rd)due to a bad cold and high fever. I will show you the certificate from the doctor to support my application. I will go back to school as soon as I recover.(I promise I will do my best to catch the missed lessons on after I come back.)Wish for your allowance.

Yours respectfully, Amelia

3.请求便条

a.讲清事情的因由(为什么请求) b.请求行为

c.请求实现方式 d.致谢

套句：

请求帮助： Would you do me a favor? Would you be so kind as to…?/ Could I trouble you to send this book for me?/ If it is not too troublesome, could you…?/ I hope this request will not trouble you too much.

范文：

April 20，2008

Dear Professor Hu,

I am very happy to have the chance to listen to your lecture on “American Literature”. But it is a pity that I was late that day due to an accident on my way to the lecture and failed to get the handout. Your lecture is really instructive for my English study, so I wonder if you could kindly e-mail the handout to the address: .Heartfelt thanks.

Respectfully yours,

Amelia

4.抱怨投诉便条(关键词complain, dissatisfaction)

a.抱怨投诉行为 b.投诉内容具体描述

c.要求弥补纠正赔偿 d.抱怨投诉者对弥补纠正赔偿等的敦促或威胁

套句：

行为描述I’m writing to bring your attention to the problems I have had with … . Here’s the problem…

解决方式的要求：It would be very kind( considerate) of you to…address this problem soon. / take steps to rectify this situation soon. / turn it down a little?

敦促或威胁: Frankly, I really can’t put up with the situation any more. You must rectify the situation, or I will take it to the court. / If you can’t give me a satisfactory answer, I will complain it to the Consumer Association.