改正后:My favorite band is The Cranberries, they are a great band from Ireland. I love groups that play different kinds of music. Sometimes, they play music that's loud and energetic and sometimes, they play music that is quiet and gentle.Their songs are very amazing,the unique voices and the beautiful melody deeply interested me. I think their songs make us feel happy and relaxed,makes us full of energy and full of hope about the future. 注:我用的是美式语法