在线英语翻译改错

第一句觉得那么怪呢，her---hers2.is 后加that3.tell--telling

1.Reading another person's diary without his or her2.permission is actually to be broken the law3.My advice is to tell your mother that she is damaging your privacy

从星期一开始，我每天熬夜写论文，到十二点才睡。这个周末我得补补觉了。I have been staying up past midnight to write my paper every night since Monday. I have to catch up on some sleep this weekend. 一些年轻女性为了保持身材苗条，强迫自己节食。Some young women push themselves on diet just to keep fit.这些工人决定进行罢工，以施压取得更好的工作条件。These workers determine to go on strike, putting pressure on getting better working conditions.这个年轻人正处于人生发展的关键时刻，他不能决定是继续学业还是找工作。This young man is now at a crossroad of his personal development, he cannot decide whether to continue his studies or find a job.现在，越来越多的人愿意花一大笔钱去国外旅行。Nowadays, more and more people are willing to spend a handsome amount of money on travelling abroad for leisure.燃烧煤炭获得能源会加重环境污染。除此之外，在煤矿工作非常危险。Using coal to produce energy will result in further environmental pollution. Besides, coal mining is extremely dangerous.近来，这一可怕的交通事故成为重要新闻，为人们敲响了警钟。After this major tragic traffic accident has been heavily covered in the news, it has alarmed many people recently.想出一个系统化的方法来实施该计划是我们在座每一个人的责任。Everyone of us here should do our due diligence of coming up with a systematic approach for the implementation of this plan.~~~~~~~~~纯人手翻译，欢迎采纳~~~~~~~~~

Reading/ to read another person's dairy without his or her permission actually breaks the law.My advice is to tell your mother that she is damaging your privacy.

My grandma is an active woman ，who goes dancing every evening .She made me to go with her this evening. There were many people here，most of which were elderly women.They were dancing on the music on the playground. Several friend of my grandma’s warmly welcomed me and taught me how to dance step by step . Learn to dance was a little challenging for me at first .It was difficult for me to keep up with the beat. I tried my best to follow them but gradually I was making progress. My grandma praise me for the progress making by me and I enjoyed myself greatly. I understand why my grandma loves dancing so much. It’s good way for the elderly to work out and communicate

正确的句子如下：1. My uncle gave me a MP4 as my birthday gift.2. He joined the army 20 years ago and never returned.3. His sister married a rich man.4. He made a big mistake, and as a result, lost his job.5. Mary's parents could hardly afford the medical care.6. I plan to visit the Great Wall next month.7. A great many of children cannot go to school in poor areas.8. I want to see him the minute he arrives.9. We need to discuss the report today.10. I saw a tall man enter our office.11. The number of people who lost homes reached as many as 250000.12. They began to grow corn, a plant that can not grow well in dry regions.13. The Chinese diet is a little bit different from the British diet.14. People all over the world are now beginning to learn English.15. Thick trees and green grass could be seen everywhere.

1。reading another2.permission 拼错，你没打错原句吧？3.is to tell