I will get home(一般不用go) at 9 o'clock, and would you like to(礼貌) come to my house(指房子一般用house) in the evening(晚上6,7点:10点多的话用at night)? Besides(连接词:此外),when do you go to work tomorrow(不用将来时,虽然有tomorrow。因为工作时间是已经安排好了的)?
这个分很多情况哈,如果是一般的单纯有有什么事需要他人去你家就说“I need you to come to my home with me.”; 如果是想邀请别人去你家玩什么就说“I 'd like to invite you to my home.”; 又如果像男女朋友去见家长,可以说“I want you to meet my family.”;又或者像你想要某人陪你回家,可以说“I want you to company me home.”