My outstanding achievement is not good, so I wish to reach this business.
My performance is poor, so I hope to achieve the business .
我觉得中文上的逻辑是否可以修改一下，改为“我希望更好的业绩，所以想做成这笔生意。” I'd like to achieve more at work, so I really hope we can make this deal.
My performance is not good, so I want to accomplish this business.
Although the company's performance is not good, but I have confidence to change this situation
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