英语新闻短评示范

第一步：引述材料，摆出现象（叙）第二步：从现象中提取论述的观点（评） 第三步：分析论证观点（析） 要联系实际，紧紧围绕论点，运用各种论证方法第四步：总结全文，提出倡议（结）

the characteristics of Chinglish 中式英语特点As we know, English is the most widely spoken language in the world and has been a multinational, multicultural and multifunctional language. With more and more communication between Chinese and English speakers in the fields of business and education, English is playing an important role among Chinese and has become a necessary tool in today’s competitive world. However, with an impressive command of English vocabulary and good master of grammar as well as phonetics, which, to some extent, are beyond the native speakers’ capacity, they are confronted with quite a few problems when they are talking or writing in English. Their gestures, either shrug or shake their heads, usually make the foreigners confused and at the same time make themselves trapped in an embarrassed situation. What has happened to the Chinese speakers? Why does the language they use sound alien to the foreigners? Retracing the cause, I find most of the Chinese learners’ mistakes are not made due to their lack of grammar or vocabulary but due to an odd language they use, namely Chinglish, an excrescence of standard English, which is defined as a portmanteau of the two words Chinese and English and refers to spoken or written English which is influenced by Chinese. In order to make English learners convey their views more efficiently both in speech and writing, I attempt to illustrate the characteristics and causes of Chinglish in detail and predict the trend of the development of Chinglish so as to help people make proper use of Chinglish when they communicate with native speakers of English.

新闻短评，按照如下步骤写：

首先是引述材料摆出现象。

第二步，从现象中提取论述的观点。

第三步，分析论证观点，要联系实际紧紧围绕论点运用，各种论证方法。

第四步，总结全文提出倡议，叙述要概括简明，描写要鲜活，议论要深刻，这就是新闻短评的特点和基本要求。

写作要求：

1、叙述要概括、简明，并且要特别注重叙述的故事性和情感性。其中，故事性要求有必要的悬念和一波三折的情节；情感性要求在叙述事件时进行适当的煽情，以引起受众的共鸣。

2、描写要鲜活。在新闻评论中，特别注重对正在发生的行为或过程的描写，以较强的现场感和动态感服务于对新闻事实的叙述，更服务于对评沦主题的论述。

3、议论要深刻。新闻评论是论点、论据、论证一应俱全的论说文体，所有的语言要素与表达手法都为论点的提出、论据的选择和论证的过程服务。

1、首先开头第一段应该采用或简述的方式，叙述这些新闻的来源，以及主要的事实；

2、第二段开门见山提出论点，从某事件的现象中提取论述的观点，说明反面的危害性、或者不对之处，或者走向反面的必然结果，可以事实也可以理论。

3、再者联系实际，紧紧围绕论点，运用各种论证方法；

4、最后结尾，引用论点结束新闻短评即可。

扩展资料：

1、短评的分析说理应该生动引人，议论风生，运用多种议论手法使文章富有生气；其次，短评的结构方式应灵活多样，依据不同的评析对象变换文章开头、结尾与谋篇布局；再有，短评的语言文字也应生动活泼，使文章在言之有物的同时短而有趣。

2、一般来说，短评的字数多在500字左右，短评的短小精悍还体现在评析内容的具体、立论角度的集中、结构的简约和文字的精练上。短评不是社论或评论员文章的缩写形式，它抓住新闻报道或所评析事物的某一点进行议论，力求行文精粹。

参考资料：百度百科-新闻短评