马山县英语作文培训

Ten years before,my hometown was little and poor.And now there are tall buildings here and there. The streets are wider and cleaner.Many people get rich.They go to work by car..A lot of people have their Mobile and PC.

Last sunday, it was a fine day. My friend and I went to Mount Daifu. In the morning,we rode bikes to the foot of the mountain.After a short rest,we climbed the mountain.on its peak,,we shared the beautiful scenery in our eyes. There were lots of light foggy clouds around us.What's more, varieties of birds flying around us were pretty.What a harmony situation! At noon,we had lunch in a restaurant. With a happy emotion, we finished our climbing. Although tired, we still felt happy and relaxed.we hope our country will become more and more beautiful.如果你满意我的答案，请点击本页面的“选为满意回答”按钮，谢谢！

金山霸王。好用方便

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My Home Town My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life. In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved. I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.Great Changes in My Hometown I used to live in a small town with trees all around. There was no tall building and the only street was narrow. Just outside the town， there was a river. You can see different kinds of fish swimming in the clear water. People here lived a simple life. Great changes have taken place here. You can see tall buildings， big department stores and factories everywhere. Different kinds of cars and buses are running in the big streets. But with the development of the industry， we have fewer trees. Air and water pollution is becoming more and more serious. We must do something to stop pollution and make our town even more beautiful.

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