I kept a few goldfish, goldfish is my grandpa to store to buy.
The goldfish shape strange, their head hard, eyes like two black gems, mouth sometimes vomit a bubble, it looks interesting. Their body was covered with scales, flashing golden light, it looks like wearing a golden warrior of golden armor to save the planet. Of course the most special or their tails, their tails a shake a put, together, the goldfish swim fast can't do without it. Goldfish tail shape is different, some like a pair of scissors, like to cut up all the advance to the sea; Some tail like a fork, fork like ahead of difficulties; And like a triangle, the avenue of guided it into light.
They eat the food scene can be funny. When feeding, grandpa in the goldfish bowl big goldfish to react at first, like a bottle of rush out of the arrow, other small fish have also flooded in. Like this big put little crowded, who all want to get the food, are scrambling to grab the struggle. I smiled at a side ha ha ha.
Goldfish sleep time is also very funny, they sink below the surface, or open the eyes, because there is no eyelids goldfish. The golden fish scales up, like a one sun in the water, is really beautiful.
I love you little goldfish!
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