overwork英语作文

整体没多大问题。有一些小问题第一段的opinion on，on改成of，以下是我对这一现象的看法。“choose to overwork”你用了两遍。推荐一些词组be tempted to do sth，intend to do sth还有they have few money，few是形容可数名词，应该改成little money。最后是for survive，survive是动词，改成survival满意请采纳哦

As we all know everyone wants to live long, however, that just depends on your body's health. Do you know how to keep healthy? I'd like to offer you two ways: Proper Dinners: Generally speaking, one should eat 3 times every day. But some students who get up late will ignore the breakfast, which will do a very bad effect on their healty. Anyway, some girls who would prefer to be thin will avoid eating anything or only little during the meal time. Both of the two ways are bad habits of dining. We shouldn't feel hungry or full after dinners. Students are usually very busy with their homework, so they cannot take time to do exercises or too lazy to do them. This is another killer to health. We should at least take time to have P.E lessons or do morning exercises everyday to keep health. All in all, Being in fitness is our goal, it's also the basic of all contributions and success.望采纳！！！谢谢！！！

您好，以下是本人按题目要求写的英语作文供参考。若回答对您有所帮助，请点击本页面中的“选为满意回答”按钮，谢谢。 Dear Uncle XXX, How are you doing? Hope this finds you well.Thanks for the invitation for your birthday party. Our family are very pleased that you are inviting us for the party, but we are afraid we cannot join you at the time. As you may know, my father has something wrong with his tooth, and he has to go to the dentist this Sunday. My mother will go to the concert held on Sunday night. My brother also has to go play baseball with his class team on that day. As for me, I have to study for an English test on Monday. We are so sorry that we cannot make it to the party, but we will send you a nice birthday present instead. Sincerely yours, XXX Jan. 2nd, 2013

在学校周围有一家新开的购物中心。There's a new shopping center right next to the school它就在公共汽车站的附近。It's right around the bus stop这家购物中心很大，我们可以购买到各种不同种类的商品。The shopping center is really big. We can get all kinds of products in there.放学后我经常和同学们去购物中心，有时买衣服。I always go to that shopping center with my friends after school. We bought clothes sometimes.在购物中心的附近，也有一家餐馆，我们可以吃到四川食物。Around the shooping center, there's a restaurant where we can have Sichuan food.四川食物很辣，但是我想你肯定会喜欢。Sichuan food is really spicy. But I think you'll like it.