如何润色英语作文

Is it necessary to help someone who is in danger?This question often cause heated discussion.Recently,more people tend to be indifferent to people who are in need. For example,when an old man fall down to the road , no one dare to show their kindness.how shameful this behavior is!Such news always make me feel sad.It's a pity that it might result in the absence of morality. As I see,just as the proverb goes,the rose is in her hand,the flavor in mine.It should be put highest priority for us to help others.It is widely recognized that sometimes we would be exorted by those who behave wounded deliberately.What's more,what has resulted in the phenomenon is the loss of awareness of the moral values. .As we all know,there is no denying of the fact that anybody wouldn't need others' help once in a while.Appealing to the public to help others is both significant and essential.Not only the citizens but also the government are supposed to take measures to minimize the loss of social morality so that there are more warm-hearted people and fewer cold-heart citizens.We might as well to be careful and ensure if they need help before we help others.Meanwhile,the society plays an important role in mutual assistance. The more attention we pay to others,the more happiness we can generate . 只能这样了，这样显得文章更加完整一些，还是尽量不要百度一些句子，因为一些用法不是很对，用自己熟悉的或者是书上的

你读 ？ 看看 我是不是可以 、、

第一段used to be beautiful,后面用完成时更好，has already been full of…… 第二段感觉很乱 第三段it is high time(that) we should enhanced people's……你的用法感觉错了，首尾两段写的不错！

I genuinely want to express my thanks to my parents. They educate me about how to learn, how to live, and how to love. I wouldn't be so happy if they are not here. During my childhood, my father surprisingly found that I have talent and passion in painting. He then discussed with my mother, and reached a consensus to send me to painting major, where I am lucky to develop my interest. Also, in the senior high school time, my parents didn't urge me to study for a good score, but to pursue my own interest, which leads me to my current road. They acknowledged me that love is the most important element in learning something. I hope my parents can receive my love through this letter.

Birth control is of great importance and is definitely inevitale to the country's conomic development.

呵呵，我改了一些不太准确的词，加了几个连词显得通顺一些，删掉了多余的东西。不知道怎么样。请多多指教^_^ In the recent decades ,China has experienced an ever increasing economic boom. With the development of the economy，many panies have to change their ways of management and strategies to meet their needs for Information and Communication Technology.As a result, information industry in China has undergone fast development. As an old saying “technology is the source of productivity”, technology plays a central role in modern society.However, Distributed Systems in China is still at its preliminary period at present,and shortage of professionals who are expert in Distributed Systems is one of the most pelling problems. The vacancy in this field drives me to pursue further study in Distributed Systems.

I HAVE always been keen on listening to Classic Music. My favourite singer is Adrea Bocelli WHO is an italian blind singer. His special kind of tenor voice HAS always been a infatuation to me. Bocelli was born in Lajatico, Italy in 1958. At the age of six, he started to play MUSIC INSTRUMENTS such as piano, flute ,saxophone, trumpet and guitar.When he was 12, he pletely lost his sight after an aiedent of a soer game. Yet it didint discourage him a bit, because of the inspiring words that CAME out of his father's mouth"Hey little boy, dont be sad! This world belongs to everyone, instead of not seeing the world in front of you, what you can do is, let this world shine on you!" He went on to study and graduated from the University of Pisa. In 1994, his first album came out called“Il calmo della sera", which MEANS the peace evening sea in English, ENTERING the Italian Top Ten. My favourite SONGS from that album are "Il mare calmo della sera" and "sogno". He is great! Every time I listen to his voice, it just gives me a sense of peacefullness. I can feel the joy and happiness throughout the song. His attitude toward life is what I like best --- optimistic. I'm sure that his SONGS will stay with me for my entire life.

看不见，不是我眼睛出事了吧。 If you have a friend who gives his hand to you ... In my life...意为‘在我的生命里’， 比during my life 好，因为你的一生好长着呢。 ...firendship is the most valuable wealth and unfading memory that I own. when I was 10 ...I didn't get any ...(时态有问题，改称过去时比较好) ...standing behind me. We don;t study in the same... 最后一句不知所云。

英语写作能力也是灵活运用知识的一种综合能力。 1.中国有句古话，叫"熟读唐诗三百首，不会吟诗也会作"。同样，要使自己具有较强的写作能力，首先应该熟读和背诵一些句型和短文。许多同学写出来的语言根本不符合英语的语言习惯，相当一部分人有对照中文逐字翻译的不良习惯，不去理会中英文的差异。大量的背诵和阅读是提高写作能力的有效办法，同学们若有大量的现成语言积累在脑海里，自己写起文段来，就可以做到脱口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至发挥。 2.可以采用循序渐进、灵活多样的练习方式。从根据提示词写单句开始，到写单句，然后到写几句话，最后到写流利的文段。 3.尝试多种形式的写作，如短信、说明、通知、便条、明信片、看图写作、根据表格或记录写短文等。 4.在练习时，要充分了解所提供的情景素材，注意使用常见的连接词来表示顺序和逻辑关系，使句意表达连贯、语法正确、符合逻辑。还要注意字母的大小写和标点符号。

Hello,everybody. My name is XXX,and you may call my English name XXX. I am XX years old.I graduated from XXX School.Watching movies,surfing on the Internet, reading books as well as listening to the music are my hobbies in my leisure time which can relax me and enrich my scope.I am an open-minded and optimistic person who is easy to get along with, that helped me make a lot of friends. Moreover, I'm a person with strong will and independent mind. Now, I am very glad to know you and wish to make friends with you. I believe we would share a memorable time during the coming school years here. Thank you!

Hello,everybody.My name is XXX,and my Chinese name is XXX. I am XX years old.I graduated from XXX School.My hobbies include watching movies,surfing the Internet as well as reading books and listening to music in my spare time.I have always been told by my friends that I am an open and optimistic person who is easy to get along with.Also I'm a person with strong will and an independent mind.Nowadays, I am very glad to know all of you and wish to make friends with you.I believe we will have a great time during the following school years here. Thank you very much!