第一行：or caring改成and caring第二行：changes改成changed第三行：helplessly改成helpless。to repair去掉to，help后接动词原形。其他网友没有看到这条第四行：members去掉s第五行：he could hire改成she could hire第六行：doing for free改成done for free。received call中间加ashortly before从意思上和语法上都没问题，就快要到家的意思，其他网友说要改成after不对的第七行：fix on去掉on。最后一行：also改成again。一共10处。
1 As far(改为long) as you work hard ，you will succeed some day 2 Did you really turn your back form（改为to） his suggestion？3 A few (加上of)my friends have gone on a trip round the world4 It is so kind of you to see me off away(去掉away) at the railway station5 The house，belonged(改为belonging) to my grandfather now ，is being repaired
1 As long as （只要）you work hard ，you will succeed some day 2 Did you really turn your back on（不理睬） his suggestion？3 A few 0f(加上of ) my friends have gone on a trip round the world4 It is so kind of you to see me off (away去掉） at the railway station5 The house， which 引导非限制性定语从句）belonged to my grandfather now ，is being repaired
My grandma is an active woman ，who goes dancing every evening .She made me to go with her this evening. There were many people here，most of which were elderly women.They were dancing on the music on the playground. Several friend of my grandma’s warmly welcomed me and taught me how to dance step by step . Learn to dance was a little challenging for me at first .It was difficult for me to keep up with the beat. I tried my best to follow them but gradually I was making progress. My grandma praise me for the progress making by me and I enjoyed myself greatly. I understand why my grandma loves dancing so much. It’s good way for the elderly to work out and communicate
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