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The technique designed in this article, which uses small interests to lead the key person who obstructs the criminal plan away from the crime scene, was later adopted again in Three People with Surnames of Garridbou.
本篇中设计的利用小的利益把阻碍犯罪计划的关键人引离犯罪现场的手法后来在《三个姓加里德布的人》一篇中被再次采用。
本篇细节上的漏洞有两处,一是文中给出的时间和当事人叙述的时间不吻合。
At the beginning, it was said to be "a day last autumn", but when Dr. Watson saw the newspaper that published the news of the Red Cross Society and read it to Holmes and Mr. Wilson, he recorded that "this is the Chronicle Annual Report on April 27, 1890, exactly two months ago."
开篇就说是“去年秋天的一天”,但华生医生看到发布红发会消息的报纸并给福尔摩斯和威尔逊先生读报时,自己记录道“这是一八九○年四月二十七日的《纪事年报》,正好是两个月以前的。”
It can be seen that this time is about the end of June. On the card that Mr Wilson saw announcing the dissolution of the Red Hair Association, he wrote: "The Red Hair Association has been dissolved, which is a sign".
可见此时大约是六月底。而威尔逊先生看到的宣告红发会解散的卡片上则写到:“红发会已经解散,此启”。