英语四级作文初一

I’ll show you the journey of london.The capital of England-London.It's beautiful and wonderful.Here we go,guys！There are lots of places of interest like Hyde Park or Big Ben.And the buildings' style isn't so modernization but so classic and vintage.And the men like gentlemen because they know the Lady First.And second point is food.We all like the western food because they are delicious.Although it's expensive but it's worth.I'm sure that you will be happy when you get there.Just enjoy the journey to the london

I went to london for a week .this vocation real make me feel relax and comfortable.london is a good place for someone to relax,it have suitable temperature.second,i visit something interest in there,for example, we went to hiking,we lost the way

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