英语作文813句话

去年的暑假，我过得很高兴，因为我去姥姥家了。到了姥姥家，我看见姥姥家没有什么变化小房间还是那样

A friend is a person who can let you feel warm when you are depressed. I have many friends.But XXX is my best friend.He is as old as me.He taller than me.Basketball is his favorite sport.We are in the same class.He is good at study.So his study is very good.We learn from each other and help each other.He will help me if i got in trouble.I will help he as much as I can. I hope our friendship will forever and ever. A friend is someone who can let you feel warm when you are depressed. I have many friends. However I only have one best friend and it's XXX. He is the same age as me. He is taller than me. Basketball is his favourite sport. We are in the same class. He likes studying and is good at it, so he gets high marks. We learn from each other and help each other. He will help me if I ever get into troubles. So will I. I hope our friendship will last forever and ever 翻译：朋友是当你在沮丧消沉的时候能给你温暖的人.因此我又很多朋友.XXX是我最好的朋友.他和我一样大却比我高.他最喜欢的运动是打篮球.我们是同班同学.他的学习很棒,因此他的成绩很好.我们相互学习相互帮助.我有困难的时候他会帮我,而他又困难我也会尽力帮他.我希望我们的友谊能天长地久.请采纳谢谢

My familyI have a happy family, our family has three persons, father, mother and me,.My father is a traffic police,and mother is selling children's clothes, usually is my mother and I at home, dad didn't come back until the weekend, and we have a happy life.

Hello everybody !My name is XXX , a fourteen-year-old girl .I'm a student of XXX school . I have a happy family and there are three people of my family ,my mother , my father and I .I live in an apartent buiding . Every morning my mothermake breakfast for us . She gets up so early , My father goes to work by car . He is a humorous and diligent man . He is busy so he always goes to bed late . My teachers and classmates are friendly to me . I have an interesting scho

在平平淡淡的日常中，大家对作文都不陌生吧，作文是从内部言语向外部言语的过渡，即从经过压缩的简要的、自己能明白的语言，向开展的、具有规范语法结构的、能为他人所理解的外部语言形式的转化。你知道作文怎样才能写的好吗？以下是我帮大家整理的话题英语作文8篇，欢迎阅读与收藏。

4月24日星期四中午我参加了学校外语节西班牙风情展演讲，在二楼多功能厅，每班有一个评委，我班的评委是仰佳懿。

刚上台的时候，我有些害怕，开始演讲就好多了，讲完下去的时候，有好多老师对我翘大拇指，Nancy也说我表演得很好。回到班级，Nancy对同学们说：“郁思琪虽然还要参加外语节排练，但还是把演讲稿背熟了，取得了好成绩。有付出才会有收获！”过了几天，Nancy说我得了特等奖并发给我一张奖状，这是我在福山拿到的第一张奖状，我太激动了！

I have a health bd, because I have a health lifestle. I exercise ever da, usuall when I ce he fr schl. M eating habits are prett gd. I tr t eat a lt f vegetables. I eat fruit and drin il ever da. But I never drin cffee, because sas, it is t bad fr health. I lve un fd, t. But I eat it nl nce a wee. I sleep nine hurs ever night. Gd fd and gd rest can help e t stud better! And health lifestle helps e get gd grades!

As we all kown that The World Expo will be held in Shanghai,China in these day. It witnesses the High-level and all-directional the develop of China in recent years. It also shows clearly that China is now growing up . Honestly, The World Expo will be coming with The great significance.

To begin with, The World Expo will be held in Shanghai,China,which will promote the senses of the pride and national cohesion for every chinese people. More and more people will have an agreement on the development in China. then, it will develop local economics in order to increase GDP in China. Because foreign currency will be coming accompany foreigns'coming. Finally, we can strengthen the communicated with each other,including the culture, the economic and so on.

As a chinese people,I have a great desire for welcoming you all to my country. You must be surprised while coming. So , may you enjoy it !

定句型，连词成句

这个环节是成文的关键，一定要注意做到：

（1）选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。在熟悉的基础上，鼓励多用高级词汇和结构复杂的复杂句。如表达“为了……”时，可用inorder to do 或 so as todo.也可用sothat引导目的状语从句。

（2）写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式、谓语动词形式要有根有据。

（3）表达限定的内容有困难时，就要想到“AllroadsleadtoRome.”这句话，用变通的方法，以达到“曲径通幽”。如要译“他表哥外强中干”这样一句话，表达起来似乎很难，但我们完全可以通过学过的东西将这句话明白贴切地表达出来：Hiscousinlooks strong but in fact,he is rather weak.

（4）尽量避免使用汉语式的英语。例如要表达“她睡得很迟”，不可写成：Shesleptvery late.应该写成：Shewent tobed verylate.因为“sleeplate”表示“睡懒觉”。又如要表达“他一点都不担心他的英语”，不可写成：Heisnot a little worried abouthisEnglish.实际上意思完全相反，表达成“他非常担心他的英语”了。应该是：Heisnot a bit worried about his English. 或：He isnotworried about his English at all.

连词成句，添减相宜

单句写出后，根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要，重新排列组合已写成的句子，划分必要的段落，一般分成三段。

即：文章的开头（Introduction）、文章的主体(Mainbody)和文章的`结尾(Conclusion).这样写成文章的初稿。在连词成句的过程中，还要注意以下几点：

（1）句子或段落间的连接不仅仅是个语言问题，也是个逻辑思维方面的问题，这两者是不能分开的。能注意到这一点，你的文章就能达到条理清楚、层次分明的境界。

（2）为了使句子或段落语义连贯，表达合理准确，可以适当加入一些连接词语。如表达转折可用but,however,otherwise等，表达递进可用and,also,besides,Whatsmore等，表达因果so,therefore,asaresult等，表达对比可用atthesametime,meanwhile，while等，表达让步可用though,although,evenif等。有时还需要加入一些必要的过渡句子以达到承上启下的效果。

（3）仔细推敲在文章的哪些地方可用复杂句。切忌生搬硬套，给人一种为了用复杂句而用复杂句的感觉。要用得自然、得体。要顺应行文的需要，与整个文章浑然一体。

尽量使用我们熟悉的宾语从句、状语从句和定语从句。

检查，修改，定稿，誊写

检查修改是进一步减少疏漏提高质量的最后程序，这时要对照题目要求，认真检查以下几点：

（1）内容有无遗漏或误词，最好一一对应检查。

（2）体裁格式对不对。

（3）句子是否有语法结构错误，特别要检查句子中的冠词、代词、名词复数、动词的时态、语态、主谓一致等方面是否有错误。

（4）句子是否合乎英语表达习惯，是否达意。

（5）书写字迹和标点符号是否规范清晰，词数是否基本上符合要求。经过认真修改润色的短文，即可认真工整地誊写在指定的卷面上。抄好后再速读一遍，力求完美。

经典题例

下面以扬中树人今年3月中考一模试卷的作文为例，谈谈写中考英语作文的具体步骤和应注意的事项。

原题介绍

目前，扬州正在创建(create)全国文明城市（NationalCivilizationCity）。作为一个中学生，我们在学校、在家里、在公共场合等等应该做到哪些才能称得上是一个文明的(civilized)人呢？我们又如何为这个活动作贡献（makecontributionto）呢？请你就此写一篇100字左右的短文。

The Joys Of Learning English

Some of my friends are puzzled that I have chosen English as my major to have a further study in college.They believe that their majors like electronic machinery and civil engineering are hopefully promising and that my choice,learning English is not wise .I, however,think English Study has brought me rewards , including practical use andainner satisfaction.

One obvious reward of learning English is practical use .I firstly have more opportunities to open up my new horizon in daily life . Spending much more time in learning it enables me to view popular English TV shows or read some English periodicals and classics . That spurs me to know more about something western , like lifestyles or thinking patterns ,by which , my knowledge reserves and horizon naturally are expanded . English study also is an advantageous skill for career development .With the encrease in cost of filling the vacant positions ,many foreign employers are more willing to hire a technical talent mastering English rather than spend more money on hiring a technical talent and an English one . Learning English Clearly gives a great advantage of getting a job.

More important , Learning English is joyful because the inner satisfaction it gives .I felt excited and fulfilled when I figured out the beauty of a word or true intention of the author .Two weeks ago ,I was asked to finish an English writing about an emotion .I did not do well in the first two times , although I employed all my energies in it .When my teacher reminded me to pay attention to one word “emotion ”, I leaped to a conclusion that I just narrated an event rather than described an emotion . I finally did an excellent revised manuscript. That improvement in English study made me attain a sense of satisfaction although it was a small step in learning it.

Some people may think English study wastes much time and energy and is barely useful .In fact , I am pleased with English study in that it is useful in daily life now and my future career , and most of all , it gives me a inner satisfaction .

上周上英语课的时候，吴老师说：“今天我们要评选出全班的前十名，前十名的评选标准是奖章数占百分之六十，还有要看你的单词记背的好不好。”吴老师接着说：“现在奖章5个以上的举手。”我一听便高高地举起了手，我听其他同学说：“我的5个！”，“我的6个！”……我一数，啊！我的9个呢，最多的一个，我真是太高兴了！

然后，老师开始提问单词，有同学说错了，有的不会说，轮到我了，我全部正确说出来了。连吴老师也表扬我呢！

最后，我顺利地被评选为前十名，不过，我不会骄傲自满的，一定要继续努力！

The English speech contest is always the focus in every university. It is not only a kind of heated competition to select a few students with the best English fluency , but a festival for English learners to get together and learn from each other.

As a contestant，I think one should be confident and full of hope. Although there must be many competent candidates，you are one of them. Most of the time self-assurance will help you a lot to get to the very end of the game. Another important point one should bear in mind is that speech contest is a unique form of speaking. It involves many special techniques , such as advocating，stressing certain words，and make some gestures. After learning the article by heart，one should do more practice in performing，that is to say，in how to deliver the speech. Last but not least, one should have proper attitude towards the final results. You should not emphasize too much on the ranking. It will only exist for the time being. As long as you have learned something through the contest, it's not a waste of time, and you will be quite clear about the direction for your future efforts.

To sum up，English speech contest is a kind of beneficial activity, which deserves the active participation of every college student.

用英语谈谈你对电影的看法：

Of all kinds of movies, I like comedies best. I think they're interesting. My favorite actor is Jackie. I like his movie King of Comedy. I think it’s a successful comedy. For action movies, I like The Lord of the Ring best. It’s exciting. I like documentaries because they’re true stories. I like only some thrillers. Many thrillers are scary and boring.

在各种各样的电影中，我最喜欢喜剧片。我认为它们很有趣。我最喜欢的演员是成龙。我喜欢他的电影“喜剧之王”。我认为这是一个成功的喜剧。至于动作片，我最喜欢“指环王”。它令人兴奋。我喜欢纪录片，因为他们是真实的故事。我只喜欢一些恐怖片。许多恐怖片都太恐怖和无聊。

请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的周末生活：

I have a good weekend. On Saturday morning，I do my homework. After lunch, I go shopping with my mother. At about five o’clock, I go to play basketball with my friend. On Sunday, I watch a football game on TV. I often help my mother do housework. I watch TV with my parents in the evening. Then I go to bed at nine o’clock. I’m very happy on weekends.

我有一个美好的周末。星期六早上，我做我的作业。午饭后，我和我的母亲去购物。大约5点，我和我的朋友一起玩篮球。星期天，我在电视上观看足球比赛。我经常帮助妈妈做家务。晚上我和我的父母看电视。然后我在九点钟去睡觉。周末我很快乐。

以 My Favorite…为题，写一篇短文：

My favorite subject is English. I like it because it is interesting. I have English every day. I can speak a little English. I join the school English club. Every afternoon I go there to talk in English. I can see English movies and read English books. I think it is useful for me. I want to learn it well. I like English very much.

我最喜欢的科目是英语。我喜欢它，因为它很有趣。我每一天都上英语课。我会讲一点英语。我参加了学校的英语俱乐部。每天下午我去那里用英语交谈。我可以看英文电影和阅读英文书籍。我想这对我来说是有用的。我想学好它。我非常喜欢英语。