大一英语句子改错

1.去掉it. 2.which改为who 3.who后的he去掉 4.去掉it. 5.who改为that 6.which改为who 7.去掉it. 8.that改为who 或直接去掉 9.who her 改为whose 10.which 改为whose 11.lives 改为live 12.去掉them

1 that换成when2 which换成who3 去掉he4 that换成who5 who换成which6 which换成who7 去掉it8 that换成who9 10 lives换成live11 去掉them

1. 去掉it.2. which改为who3. who后的he去掉4. 去掉it.5. who改为that6. which改为who7. 去掉it.8. that改为who 或直接去掉9. who her 改为whose10. which 改为whose11. lives 改为live12. 去掉them希望能帮到你。

首先一个问题是你的逗号，逗号前面没有空格，后面有空格。第五句改成A course of instruction is necessary to swim properly更顺畅。第六句逗号用错了。一句好里面两个逗号这样放着就代表你去掉逗号里面的句子整句话也会通，但是你这里不通，所以应该是Returning home after work, supper was waiting for him in the kitchen.第七句要加个a, the young man is honest and hard-working, also a very reliable worker.第八句改成There are many ways we can use to get to know the outside world.

I enjoy the music that we are listening to .The people who live next to me are friendly.He is the man who taught me English.I gave the book to him that he needed.The airline has a booklet that will tell you most of the important things about a trip to Europe.The man who told me the news refused to give me his name.The book which I bought at the bookstore was very useful.The woman was nice who I met yesterday.I met a woman that her husband is a famous lawyer.……