XX (The essay) is wanting in improvements. (rectification)
不好,Not good,希望你帮到您望采纳谢谢
If you think I am not good or you don't satisfied me.Please tell me and I will overcome.
No good.
please give me a chance to improve if I haven't down right in first time.
there are some shortcomings
Pleaseexcuseusifthereisanythingbad.爱学英语有空来我们新东方英语版块来玩吧
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