扩展句: in it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon
第三段:对学校食堂正面的看法
主题句:as you know, _____ . but unfortunately, ______.
扩展句:1、___. (举例) as a result, _____.
2、besides, ______.
3、and what's more, _____.
第四段:对学校食堂负面的看法
主题句:some people may argue that ____.
扩展句:1、for instance, ____ and ____.
2、but in my opinon, ______.
第五段:结尾,表明自己看法
结尾句:to be belief, though a bit dissatisfied with _____.
扩展句:i do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solved the problems there. thanks.li ming
第一段:称呼
dear mr. president,
第二段:引出写信的目的
主题句: this letter comes to you from one of your students.
扩展句: in it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon
第三段:对学校食堂的看法
主题句:as you know, our students are the main customers of the university canteen. but unfortunately, we don't find the service there satisfying sometimes.
扩展句:
1、the food is not as nutritious as it should be. (举例) as a result, some of us become thinner and weaker at university.
2、besides, sometimes the canteen people just bring us steamed bread with their dirty bare hands.
3、and what's more, the fare is also a little higher at university.
第四段:别人对食堂看法
主题句:some people may argue that measures have been taken and things are improving there.
扩展句:
1、for instance, ic cards have taken the place of money in the canteed, and the attitude of the service people is also changing.
2、but in my opinon, progress is not so quick and thorough.
第五段:结尾,表明自己看法
结尾句:to be belief, though a bit dissatisfied with the present canteen conditions,
扩展句:i do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solved the problems there. thanks.
第三部分、范文
dear mr. president,
this letter comes to you from one of your students.in it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon.
as you know, our students are the main customers of the university canteen. but unfortunately, we don't find the service there satisfying sometimes.the food is not as nutritious as it should be. as a result, some of us become thinner and weaker at university.besides, sometimes the canteen people just bring us steamed bread with their dirty bare hands.and what's more, the fare is also a little higher at university.
some people may argue that measures have been taken and things are improving there.for instance, ic cards have taken the place of money in the canteed, and the attitude of the service people is also changing.but in my opinon, progress is not so quick and thorough.
A Dragon boat race is a traditional amusement activity in dragon boat festival. Today, my mother took me out to watch dragon boat races. I was very excited, because this was my first time to watch such race. When we arrived at Nanhu Park, there were hundreds of people around the two sides of the river. We found a place can see the match clearly hardly. The participate sat on the boat look like dragon. When the signal to start set, everyone on the boat tried their best to make the boat forward. And the people who were watching also cheered them. The air was very lively.
Mother’s Day is coming, and I even want to say, “My mum is the most beautiful woman in the world.”
母亲节就要到来了,我想说,“我的妈妈是世界上最美丽的女人。”
I still remember the day I bought a bunch of carnation for my mum. I will never forget the smile when she accepted the flowers. That Mother’s Day was wonderful. We had a small cake, a warm talk.
I consider mum as the most important person in a family. My mum is a great, great mum. I love her. I wish her happy not only on the Mother’s Day. More importantly, I wish her always happy and healthy.
Mother’s Day is coming. I decide to do something special for my mum. Thanks all mothers in the world. Happy Mother’s Day.
母亲节就要来临了。我想为我妈妈做一些特别的事。谢谢世界上所有的母亲。祝您母亲节快乐。
Different people have different dreams. Some people dream of making a lot of money. Some people dream of living a happy life. Some people dream of being famous. Some people dream of going abroad, and so on. But my dream is different. Maybe you will get a surprise after you know my dream.
I have a wonderful dream in my heart. It's to speak English very well. Since English is everything for me. English is my best friend. English is my soul. English is my power. Without English, I'm nothing at all. Nothing. Now, I can think in English, speak in English, and write in English. Some people think I'm an Indian. Some people regard I'm a Pakistan. And some people even consider that I'm an Egyptian. But if I could speak English as good as an American, my future would be brilliant. So I work very hard.