1 去掉into,因为enter是及物动词,后面可以直接带名词作宾语: 2 Our teacher told us time and again never to waste our time. tell *** never to do sth 告诉某人永远不要做某事; 3 missed改成missing,表示丢失不见有这几种:missing,lost,gone; 4 to read 改成 reading,finish doing sth,完成某事; 5 At that moment,I began totally to be unaware of his presence. be (un)ware of sth (不)知道...,(没有)意识到., 6 delighted 改成delighting,一般而言,-ed结尾的形容系修饰人,如 excited fans,-ing结尾的形容词修饰物,如exciting games: 7 half a mile, 8 badly 改成bad,feel后接形容词构成系表结构: 9 as dark as evening 像晚上一样黑 10 as 改成than no more ...than...没有什么是比得上什么的了