写作思路:写出同龄人的压力,自己的感受,以及对方让自己感到压力的原因。
My brother Mao Kaijun loves learning English very much.
我的哥哥毛凯俊很爱学习英语。
He is never half hearted in his homework, He always plays after finishing his homework.
他做作业从来不三心二意,总是把作业做完才去玩。
One day, I went to his house to play, only to see him doing his homework.
有一天,我到他家去玩,只见他正在做作业。
All of a sudden, several of his friends came to play, and
Mao Kaijun, as if he had not heard, was still concentrating on his homework.
突然,他的几个朋友来玩了,而毛凯俊却像没有听见一样,仍在聚精会神地做作业。
Once, I took my cousin's favorite tape, yelled into his room and
said, "brother, look, I asked someone to borrow a new tape."
有一次,我拿来表哥最喜欢的磁带嚷着走进他的房间说:“哥,瞧,我问别人借来了新磁带。”
But there was no echo. But see cousin is buried in doing
homework, I heavily cough a few, but he is no response.
可是没有回声。却见表哥正在埋头做功课,我重重地咳嗽了几声,但他是没有反应。
His brows gathered and stretched, as if thinking about something.
只见他的眉头一会儿聚拢,一会儿舒展开来,似乎在思考着什么问题。
The pen in my hand was still scratching on the paper.
Looking at his serious manner, I can't bear to disturb him.
手中的笔还不停地在纸上划着。看着他那认真的样子,我不忍心去打扰他。
英语写作
英语作文想写好作文,必须具备扎实的基本功,作文的基本功主要体现在词、句、段三个方面。
单词方面,积累单词,扩大词汇量,弄清词的确切用法及相似词的用法区别,以及很多固定短语、习语的用法,要准确地表达想要表达的意思。
句子方面,注意一些常用的句式,平时看到比较好用的句式要记下来,多模仿,还要在写文章时注意长短句的结合。
段落方面,注意整篇文章的整体布局,要从整体上把握每段的中心思想,避免偏题、走题。
提高写作水平不是一朝一夕所能完成的,最重要的是养成好的学习习惯,平时注意多积累,勤动笔、多思考,潜移默化中写作水平便会不断提高。