高考英语作文20分

本人高考英语作文基本在24分左右，要上20分要注意以下几个方面：1.没有低级的语法错误，例如there is do...等；2.书写清晰，至少不能让人感觉不舒服，为此可以打一些关键句子的草稿；3.句型要多变。比如多用倒装句、状语从句、主语和宾语从句、强调句等，这方面在考前可以分别找一些经典句子进行记忆，到时再模仿即可；4.平时准备一些适合用于写作的词组、单词，并想想它们的适用情况。为此你可以准备一个小本子，每次模拟考前都进行复习（包括上面的句子）；5.经过以上准备后，其实用于作文可以上20分了。同时为保险起见你也可以准备一下各种常见的作文格式、关键句、关键词等。比如图表作文，你可以准备一些：compared with ...,...、as the diagram above indicated,...、关键词如phenomenon等，并在各种模拟考前重温一下；6.经过以上准备，在考试中你尽可以放心地审题、答题了。以上均为本人的切身经验，望于你有所帮助！

江苏高考英语作文要上20分要注意以下几个方面：1.没有低级的语法错误，例如there is do...等；2.书写清晰，至少不能让人感觉不舒服，为此可以打一些关键句子的草稿；3.句型要多变。比如多用倒装句、状语从句、主语和宾语从句、强调句等，这方面在考前可以分别找一些经典句子进行记忆，到时再模仿即可；4.平时准备一些适合用于写作的词组、单词，并想想它们的适用情况。为此你可以准备一个小本子，每次模拟考前都进行复习（包括上面的句子）；5.经过以上准备后，其实用于作文可以上20分了。同时为保险起见你也可以准备一下各种常见的作文格式、关键句、关键词等。比如图表作文，你可以准备一些：compared with ...,...、as the diagram above indicated,...、关键词如phenomenon等，并在各种模拟考前重温一下；6.经过以上准备，在考试中你尽可以放心地审题、答题了。

这是作文范例的链接地址，可以作为参考如： 浙江卷：范文1 I prefer my English classes to be taught only in English because it is helpful for us to improve the ability of speaking and listening in a very short time. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so I�d like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress. That�s why I prefer total English. However, since we are all English beginners, it�s really hard to understand all that the teacher says. Sometimes we need Chinese explanation. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but also using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand. 名师点评： 本文写作十分成功。语言和句式是本文最大的特点。好词中词汇的使用，将作者的意思表达得完整而准确，从而映衬了词汇的重要性；其次，本文的句式以复杂句为主，表语、定语和状语从句的使用都十分到位。 【全国卷I海南、宁夏】 【试题回放】假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括：1．外出购物2．替房东还书 K3．Tracy 来电话留言：1）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）见面取消2）此事已告知Susan3) 尽快回电注意：1. 词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Mrs. Wilson,I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change. Yours,Li Hua [名师点评] 本文属于提纲式要点作文，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活型的原则。行文人称、时态运用恰当、准确，各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。【北京卷】【试题回放】情景作文假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。注意：词数不少于60提示词：郊区 suburbs April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.【名师点评】本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。文章思路清晰，要点连贯，在语言的表达上选词新颖，同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。

平时老师给的作文分都比较低。。。拿到考卷后在开考之前你开始先看看作文题目，然后理下思路。在写作文时，尽量不要用到重复的并且很普通的句型，可以用些特殊句型，比如定语从句、倒装句、强调句等等，还有高级词汇的运用。当然不能有很明显的语法错误和拼写错误。最重要的是书写，单词最好不要连写。这样老师给的印象分就高了！如果你能做到这些，我想拿高分应该是不难的。。。我当年这样做高考英语作文23分。。。祝你成功！

Failure is actually a daily occurrence to everybody. Scientists may fail in experiments; workers may fail in turning out qualified products; farmers may fail in one crop and teachers may fail in one class, even those pop singers may fail at a certain performance. That is a really a very natural thing to happen. No one would always be correct and do nothing wrong."Even Homer sometimes nods." Some people hold that failure is not a bad thing.They say that it can give people warning and inspire people ta greater efforts;and people can draw lessons from failures and,to become more cauitous in order to do things better. An English proverb says,"Failure is the mother of success." The turth in this proverb has been proved again and again by countless facts. So many inventions and new products are results of years of experiments. Some other people think in a different way . They say failure can discourage people which will bring bad effects to their later work.Many peole become terribly beaten by failure and some even lost heart forever.Thus,they are very afraid of failure;they try to avoid it and try not to accept it.And sometimes they would even deny it when that really occurs. In my opinion,failure must have its reasonable causes. Only when you find out the real cause.can you really draw lessons from it and go on to success.A middle schoolgraduate who has failed in college entrance examinations must be able to find out that he is still weak in certain knowledge or he lacks experiences in taking exams or he doesn't know proper ways in studying. He is sure to succeed next time when he really gets to know what he needs to do.In a word, failure is not necessarily a bad thing.