Directions: Suppose you are Wei Qiang and you will graduate from university. Write a letter of inquiry to the Department of Physics, University of Wisconsin, asking for admission as a graduate student.
July, 2007
Dear Sirs,
I am very interested in undertaking graduate work in your university. I have read research papers by two of your professors Dr. Thomas Bay and Mr. Sherry Haily. I’d like to study under their guidance.
In September of 2003 I was enrolled in the Computer School of the XYZ University as a computer major. Throughout the four years of study, I take this field as one of great potentials for my country. I feel the need to study further in order to develop well in this area.
I would appreciate receiving your materials such as departmental brochure or pamphlet, and a university catalog or bulletin.
Thank you for your consideration. I am looking forward to your reply.
申请学校英文信二:
Dear Sir,
I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in Applied Physics toward Master degree in your university.
My name is Li Jin,an undergraduate student of the Department of Applied Physics,Huabei University.Next year in the summer,I will graduate and get my
B.S.degree.I plan to continue my study and research in this field.I chose Boston University because there are a congenial team of researchers,an array of databases and research projects in your school of Physics.I believe my interests are extremely congruent with the strengths of the school.And my solid academic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduate study.
I will appreciate it very much if you could send me the Graduate Application Forms,the Application Form for Scholarships/Assistantships,and other relevant information.My mailing address is shown on the top of this letter.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
申请学校英文信三:
First of all, thanks a lot for the school can enroll me as an international student, but a problem occurs on me that may causes delay for school enrollment.
my domestic school will finish the final exam aroun 18th this month, and this final exam will affect my whole GPA of my university period, and i have to attend it. so I can't attend any activities or events before 10th,
I hereby want to explain my situation, and want to ask whether the school can agree the fact that I can delay a couple of weeks to enrollment. If it permits, I will bring all the documents as well as the transcript to the schoolas soon as possible after the exam is finished. it will be very kind of you that you can understand my inconvenience, and i am looking forward to the reply form the school, thank you very much again.
I am writing to apply for a place in the MA program in Economics of your university for the 2003-2004 academic year.
I am presently a fourth-year student at the Department of Economics, BeijingUniversity.
In the past three years, I have done well and have received quite a number of scholarships and honors. When I graduate and take my Bachelor's degree in June 2003, I wish to work for my Master's degree in Economics at your Graduate School.
I would be grateful if you could send me an Application Form for Graduate Admission and a Financial Aid Form as well as information about your university. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
对于要申请海外大学的同学们来说,写一封得体的邮件可以说是一项必不可少的基本技能。不论是前期向学校询问相关申请信息,或是通过邮件补充提交申请材料,抑或是在得知申请结果后的反馈,都需要通过写邮件这个方式来进行沟通和联系。对于大学来说,除了通过邮件与申请者进行沟通和交流,一些大学还会将学生的邮件作为申请文书的一部分,放入申请材料中进行整体审核,以判断学生的综合能力和水平!这么看来,写一封得体的邮件可以说是相当重要了,但是,在辅导中国学生申请的过程中,我发现大部分同学都不知道如何写英文邮件。这个现象也很好理解,毕竟很多同学平时在学校里很少有机会通过邮件进行交流。但是,在申请海外大学时,写邮件就无法避免了,包括到海外大学正式学习后,邮件也是最重要的沟通方式之一。那么,究竟应该如何写一封得体的邮件呢?下面,我们总结了一些写邮件的小贴士,希望能够帮到正在纠结如何写邮件的你!1注册一个较为正式的邮箱名前缀现在我们最常用的邮箱可能就是QQ邮箱了,毕竟和微信、QQ绑定后,邮件查收起来真的很方便,但是,""显示在发件人一栏真的看上去非常不正规。建议同学们可以新注册一个专门用来申请的邮箱,邮箱名前缀可以是你的名字或名字缩写,比如,看上去就要比上面那一串数字要专业的多。2注意邮件抬头一般来说,我们会给大学招生办公室发邮件的情况比较多,而很多时候,我们并不知道招生官的名字,所以,在抬头中,我们可以写“Dear sir or madam"或 “Dear admission officer"。当知道收件人的姓名时,抬头可以写"Dear Mr./Ms. XXX", 一定确保不要把对方的名字拼错。3开头第一段列明自己的个人基本信息招生官一天可能要看几百上千封邮件,在这个情况下,给招生官提供一些便利,帮助对方尽快定位申请者的情况,是非常讨巧的。所以,在邮件第一段一定要写明自己的姓名,生日,申请编号,申请的项目。既帮助招生官节省定位申请者的时间,也能方便招生官根据你的情况,提供准确的回答和信息。4邮件正文用词恰当,表达简洁写邮件毕竟不是写论文,邮件的目的主要还是为了沟通,所以,沟通的有效性至关重要
一.写作点拨:申请信 类型很多包括求职信,报考申请信,留学申请信等;写申请信应注意语言言简意赅,语气诚恳礼貌,避免夸张。 申请信一般包括:申请原因、具备条件、恳请申请单位考虑自己的申请,表示谢意,期盼回复。具体为: 第一段引入事件,说明写信目的。 第二段介绍关于自己的一些具体内容。 第三段提出请求,表示感谢盼复。二.词句模板:1. 好词集锦: considerable,confident,suitable,extremely,pleased,grateful,especialy,opportunity,position,apply for,be good at,allow,would like to, offer, take...into consideration.2.说明应聘原因常用语A.I learned from sb/the newspaper that your company wanted to...B.I was told that...C.I have just read in the newspaper that your company needs a...D.I am writing to inqure opportunities for ...E.I am writing to you to inqure if there would be any position available for me to work as a...F.I am writing to apply for the job .G.I have learned from your advertisement that a ...is wanted in your company.3.介绍个人优势常用语A.Now I would like to introduce myself to you.B. My name is Tom aged 16/who is a 16-year-old boy.C.I graduated from...in 2012.D.I like/am fond of swimming, singing and dancing in my spare time.E.I work hard and Ican get along /on well with others.F.I am good at English and especially my spoken English is fairly good.G.I master English and I talk to foreigners in English freely.H.I am currently studying ...I.I would be interested in ....J.My main specialization is...4.表示感谢及请求常用语A.Thank you for your consideration of my application.B.If you agree with me,I'll work hard and try to be a...C.I am available for interview.D.I am looking forward to hearing from you.E.If you agree with me, please write to me or phone me.my telephone number is...F.I am writing to you in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to ....G.I would like to apply the position that your company offers to me.H. Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to your early reply.J. I greatly appreciate any of your favorable consideration of my application.K.I would be very grateful if you could consider my application and could send me about...l.Apart from doing sth, I may as well work as ...5.满分模板 一Dear... I am extremely pleased to see (报纸、广告) for the position (职位) .And I'm writing to apply for (职位).I am confident that I am suitable for (职位). On one hand, (原因) .On the other hand, (原因) . I shall be much honored if you will offer me the opportunity to (尝试) . I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.