Great changes have （been去掉） taken place in our school。When entering the school，you （will）see a big garden in middle of it，with rows of trees anywhere（改为everywhere）。And there are buildings for teaching，experimenrs and dormitories，that（改为which） are all equipped with the most advanced equipment。After class，we also do some sports in the newly（改为new） stadium or on the playground。Every moring，the loud voice of reading book（改为books） can be heard in the school。What's more，students can be seen together discussing some learning problems or exchange ideas.So（改为but） what appeals to（去掉） us most is the smiling faces in(改为of) teachers and students.We are living like members of a big family.In a word,I enjoyed(改为enjoy) my school life so much共十处，修改的内容在括号中，供参考。
Great changes have【been】taken place in our school。When entering the school，you see a big garden in【middle】of it，with rows of trees【anywhere】. And there are buildings for teaching，experimenrs and dormitories，【that】are all equipped with the most advanced equipment。After class，we also do some sports in the【newly】stadium or on the playground。Every moring，the loud voice of reading【book】can be heard in the school。What's more，students can be seen together discussing some learning problems or【exchange】ideas.【So】 what appeals to us most is the smiling faces【in】teachers and students.We are living like mbmers of a big family.In a word, I【enjoyed】my school life so much. 除去标点符号和几个笔误（应该是“指误”），还有以下10个错误：1. been 删除2. middle 改为 the middle 或the center （center 更好）3. anywhere 改为 everywhere4. that 改为 which5. newly 改为 new6. book 改为 books7. exchange 改为 exchanging8. So 改为 But9. in 改为 of10. enjoyed 改为 enjoy
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