b级英语作文历年

一、作文开头万能句1、Withthedevelopmentoftechnologyandscience,随着科学技术的发展（后面一定要接句子，不能单独使用）Withthegrowth\progressoftechnologyandscience=Coincidentwiththeadvancementofscienceandtechnology.2、ConsideringtheworseningsituationinChina,attentionmustbepouredintoprotectingtheenvironment.(考虑到中国越来越坏的情况，环境保护需要引起更多的重视。)3、ThefirstfiveyearsofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingdevelopmentofChina.(本世纪的头五年见证了中国的快速发展。)Astheglobaleconomygrowsatafeverpitch,……4、Coincidentwiththefastgrowingnationaleconomy,thereexistsanunfavorableandprevalentphenomenoninChina.5、Therearegrowingconcernfor……6、Inrecentyears,itiscommontosee\hearthat……7、Thereisageneraltendencythat……（有一种趋势）二、作文内容的陈述结构inthefirstplace/secondly/ontopofthat以下手段是增加句子复杂性的常见方法，也是得高分的“亮点”。1.改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词做状语等。〔原文〕Wemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogetherearlyinthemorning.〔修正〕Earlyinthemorningwemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogether.〔原文〕Theyoungmancouldn’thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.〔修正〕Hearingthebadnews，theyoungmancouldn’thelpcrying.2.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等。①强调句〔原文〕Imethiminthestreetyesterday.〔修正〕ItwasinthestreetthatImethimyesterday.ItwasyesterdaythatImethiminthestreet.②由with或without引导的短语。如:Hesatinachairwithanewspaperinthehand.③分词短语。如:Satisfiedwiththeresult，Hedecidedtogoonwithanewexperiment.④倒装句。如:Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal.NeverbeforehaveIseensuchawonderfulfilm.Notonlyshouldwestudyinthecollege,butalsolearnhowtobeadecentperson.⑤省略句。如:Ifso，victorywillbeours.Youcanmakesomechangeswherevernecessary.3.通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。〔原文〕Hestoppedushalfanhourago.Hemadeuscatchthenextoffender.〔修正〕Hestoppedushalfanhouragoandmadeuscatchthenextoffender.〔原文〕Wehadashortrest.Thenwebegantoplayhappily.Wesanganddanced.Sometoldstories.Someplayedchess.〔修正〕Afterashortrest，wehadgreatfunsinginganddancing，tellingjokesandplayingchess.注意使用不同长度的句子，要结合使用，不能只用短句或只用长句。4.学会使用过渡词。如:①递进:then(然后)，besides(还有)，furthermore(而且)，moreover(此外)等。②转折:however(然而)，but(但是)，onthecontrary(相反)，afterall(毕竟)等。③总结:finally(最后)，atlast(最后)，inbrief(总之)，inconclusion(最后)等。④强调:indeed(确实)，certainly(一定)，surely(确定)，aboveall(尤其)等。⑤对比:inthesameway(同样地)，justas(正如)，ontheonehand…ontheotherhand(一方面……另一方面……)等。相似的比较：similarly,inthesamemanner相反的比较：ontheotherhand,conversely,whereas,while,instead,nevertheless,incontrast,onthecontrary,comparedwith…,5.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。如:〔原文〕Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown.〔修正〕Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown.6.避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如:〔原文〕Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.〔修正〕Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingtelevision.Ilikereadingwhilewatchingtelevisionappealstomybrother.三、结尾1、Allinall,whatreallymattersis,infact,that……（比如说到和谐社会Allinall,whatreallymattersis,infact,thatweshouldbuildoursocietyaharmonioussociety.）2、Therefore,it’snotdifficulttodrawaconclusionthat……3、Asaresult,weshouldtakeeffectivemeasurestodosth.（我们必须采取一些有效的措施来做些什么）4、Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayconcludethat……5、Obviously（此为过渡短语）,wecandrawtheconclusionthatgoodmannersarisefrompolitenessandrespectforothers.四、一些用法1、陈述个人的观点Itisallegedthat(据说)Inmyview,bothsidesarepartlyright(两方面都部分的正确)AsfarasIamconcerned(就我而言)AsregardstomeMyownpointofviewisthat……Personally,Ibelievethat……Myexperiencetellsmethat……Theinventionofthehandset,Idaretosay,turnsouttobeatremendoushit.Theapplicationofwebsites,Idaretosay,turnsouttobeagreatlyhit.ItcomesasnosurprisethatChineseeconomybecomesincreasinglyhot.2、陈述别人的观点Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat……（错误的观点）sbisunderthefalsebeliefthat……3、图表作文Thetableshows\indicates\revealsthat……（表明、暗示、揭示）Accordingtothestatisticsshowinginthatgraph,wecaneasliysee\found……（根据表中的数据，我们可以看见，发现）Asseenfromthechart/AsisportrayedinthepictureSaleswentintoaslightdecline=salesdeclinedslightly(小幅下降)Salesdeclineddramatically/sharply/greatly/hugely(大幅下降)Abriefglimpseatourcampus(thepicture/cartoon/caricature)vividlyshowsthatmobilephone,becomingmoreandmoreprevalent.五、好的替代themachine\thedevice代替computerhandset代替cellphone*TheMiddleKingdom代替Chinaintensely\cruciallyimportant代替veryimportant(itiscruciallyimportantthatthebenefitsofcollectivebeonourpriority.)approaches代替wayscurrent(currently)代替nowgrowingindividuals代替moreandmorepeopleindividuals/characters/folks代替people,personspositive,favorable,rosy(美好的),promising(有希望的),perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,代替goodunfavorable,poor,adverse,ill代替badanarmyof,anoceanof,amultitudeof代替many,alotoftaketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat代替thinkaffair,business,matter代替thingformypart,frommyownperspective代替inmyopinionbeneficial,rewarding代替helpfulexceedingly,extremely,intensely代替verypourattentioninto代替payattentiontobearinmindthat代替rememberenjoy,possess代替havetonameonlyafew/asanexample代替forexample/instance六、常用短语老年人theold\elderly\aged\elderlypopulation\seniorcitizens年轻人youth\youngster\youngadults\adolescent中年人middleadults网吧cybercafé网虫mousepotato电视迷couchpotato优秀的学生outstanding/superior/rare/topstudents坏的影响illeffects农村rural郊区suburban城里urban在当代社会incontemporarysociety双赢awin-winsituation双输alose-losesituation建设有中国特色的社会主义buildsocialismwithChinesecharacteristics,formaeconomicsystemwithChinesecharacteristics七、写信中IwouldappreciateitverymuchIfyou……Iamthrilledtoreceiveyourmail.Lookingforwardtoapromptresponse.八、好的短语1、havegrowingrespectfor越来越重视Coincidentwiththefastgrowingeconomy,Chinahasgrowingrespectforprotectingtheenvironmentandcontrollingpopulation.随着经济的迅速发展，中国也越来越重视环境保护和控制人口了。2、enablesbtodosth（使某人可以做某事）Itenableustobuildaharmonioussociety.3、另外Inaddition/Additionally/ontopofthatAdditionally,thereisanotherreasonfortheappearanceofthisphenomenon.(现象)九、好的句子Therealpowerresidesinthepeople.(真正的权力属于人民)Wemustfightagainstthebureaucracyinordertoimprovegovernmentalwork.(为了提高政府部门的工作效率，我们必须与官僚作风作斗争。)Litterbylittle,ourknowledgewillbeenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.(慢慢的，我们的知识会充实，我们的视野会开阔。)Asaclassicproverbgoesthatnogardenhasnoweeds.(常言道，任何事物都有两面的。)也可以用everyswordhastwoedges.Everythinghasbothdarksidesandbrightsides.TaiwanisanintegralpartofChina.(台湾是中国不可分割的一部分。)十、最简单的格式Coincidentwiththefastgrowingnationaleconomy,thereexistsanunfavorable坏的现象(favorable好的现象)andprevalentphenomenoninChina.Itisestimatedthat(相关数据，例如：eightoutoftenindividualspossessahandset十个人中有八个有手机了).Whyhavetherebeensomany(某种现象)Maybethereasonscanbelistedasfollows.Firstly/inthefirstplace(原因一).Besides,/secondly(原因二).Ontopofthat/additionally(原因三).themaincauseof(某种现象)isdueto(最主要原因).Itishightimethatsomethingweredoneuponit.Foronething,(解决办法一).Ontheotherhand,(解决办法二).Allthesemeasureswillcertainlyreducethenumberof(某种现象).Allinall,whatreallymattersis,infact,that……（比如说到和谐社会Allinall,whatreallymattersis,infact,thatweshouldbuildoursocietyaharmonioussociety.）Manyseniormiddleschoolstudentsdevotealargesliceoftheirleisuretimetoplayingwebgames./toplantedthemselvesinfrontofthecomputer.Thosedayswhenthecellphone,initiallyabrickshapeitem,wasthesourceoftheprideoftherich,aresomethingofthepast.Thosedayswhenthecar,initiallyatoolonlyforauthorities,arelonggone.Therehasbeenanunshakabletruthformostpeoplethatacademicdegreeandone’sabilityiscomplementaryeachother.Onesadfactabouthumannatureisthatwedon’tseemtoappreciatewhatwehavetillit’sgone.Computercanfunctionindisserveofhumanbeings,inaway,especiallyviolence,AV-films,pornpictures.Privatecarsalsofunctioninthedisserveofhumanbeings,especiallypollution,consumptionofenergyandtraffic.Asaclassicproverbgoesthatnogardenhasnoweeds.Computerdoplayapositiveroleinthedevelopmentofpeople’slives,despiteasliceofunfavorableimpacts.Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageofthefruitsandavoidtheoppositefacet/aspect.阅读理解中subjective（主观）subjective（客观）should后面是观点，重点把握完形填空选不出来就填转折，关注第一句话，定语从句，which后面的信息很重要，用副词开头，后面是专家或作者的观点（情态动词也一样）

Of all the teachers, I love my English teacher best. He is a very good teacher and about thirty years old. We all call him Mr Chu. He is not tall but a little fat. He is a man with a good sense of humour and always friendly to us. We all like him and his lesson. In his class, we feel very happy. He always makes his English lesson interesting. We know English is rather difficult to learn but in his class, we feel English is very easy, and also very interesting.He often shows us how to learn English well. He asks us to listen, to read, to say and to write. After class, we always talk with him in English. He even lends English books to us. If we have difficulty in understanding, we can go and ask him. He is always happy to help us.He not only cares for our study, but also for our life. One day, one of my classmates, Li Tong had a bad cold. He took her to see a doctor, and got some medicine for her. Then he sent her home. When Li Tong stayed at home, Mr Chu went to her home and helped her with her lessons. Several days later, she was able to go back to school.This is my English teacher. What do you think of him?