I am ______ (自我介绍) .I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about_____.
The reason for my dissatisfaction is _______(总体介绍). In the first place,_______(抱怨的第一个方面). In addition, ___________(抱怨的第二个方面). Under these circumstances, I find it ________ (感觉)_______(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果).
I appreciate it very much if you could _______(提出建议和请求), preferably ______(进一步的要求),and I would like to have this matter settled by ____(设定解决事情最后期限).
Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.
Please send us a correction on part of our order WP-11.
All the items we ordered arrived in excellent condition except for one model. It you refer to our original order (see the copy attached), you will note that we requested your fluorescent desk-lamps, Model 606. However, Model 608 reached us instead. For details, please see the inspection certificate issued by the Tianjin Commodity Inspection Bureau.
Will you kindly take back those you sent out and substitute them with an equal quantity (120 items) of Model 606? We would appreciate your attention to this matter promptly.
Yours faithfully
【英语投诉信示范2】
School Polluted
No. 1 Middle School
March 5, 1997
Dear Editor,
Our school lies at the foot of a mountain with a small river passing by. It used to look like a beautiful garden. There used to be green trees and all kinds of flowers in our school yard all year round.
But great changes have taken place since a chemical works was built near our school two years ago. It produces poisonous gases and pours a large amount of waste water into the river. The terrible pollution has done great harm to us students and teachers as well as to the surroundings.
It's time for us to take steps to protect our surroundings and prevent them from being polluted.
I am writing to complain about the accommodation of the University.
There are some problems in living conditions, which are very unsatisfactory.
First of all, I think it's too early to turn off the lights at 10 every night.
Secondly, hot water supply is only available for a certain period of time, which is very inconvenient to my daily life.
Third, the dormitory has no internet access.
So when I need to do research for my study project, I have to go to the library.
These problems have brought trouble to my study and life.
Therefore, I have some suggestions: turn on the light for another hour, provide 24-hour hot water supply, and install Internet access in the dormitory.
I sincerely hope you will consider my suggestion and look forward to your reply.
I am writing to expressair dissatisfactiondisappointmentconcern regarding acmodation。I would prefer to move into a single room next semester,as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient。
I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate‘s inconsiderate behavior。For one thing,his friends are constantly visiting him; for another,he regularly holds noisy parties。
To solve this problemsurmount this difficultyimprove this situationcrack this hard nut,I hope to draw the attention of the authorities concerned。I am sure you will aGREe that the only solution for me is to move into a room of my own。
Therefore,I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me,preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible。