补充修改英文

用modify就可以了！

amend[E5mend]vt.改正, 改良, 改善正式地修正(议案等)校正; 变更The teacher advised him to amend his way of living.老师劝他改变生活方式。

fix change

修改什么？一般文字，图画可以用FIX,RECTIFY，REVISE，MODIFY.如果是正式的文案，法律等等，应该是AMEND如果你的“修改”有更换之意，则应该用CHANGE一般来讲，用MODIFY比较普遍，FIX比较口语，AMEND比较正式

用 alter

correct应该也可以吧。

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