对不起大家,因为字数超过限制,所以我又换个号过来加字数第二篇 是雅思考官帮我修改后的文章Should children be given pocket money?Over recent years parents have given their children an increasing amount of pocket money. According to the China Daily newspaper, the majority of people surveyed agreed that children should be given pocket money. Before presenting my view, I will explore both sides of this issue.Some parents believe that their children can benefit from being given pocket money. First of all, having some money can help children foster good habits of saving. If children are disciplined and can budget their money, they can plan how best to spend their money through making a list. Secondly, parents provide more freedom to their children by giving them money, which may help cultivate independence and develop a sense of responsibility. Last but not the least, because of pocket money, children can set goals and work towards achieving their goals, teaching them important life lessons.On the other hand, there are people contending that children should not be given an allowance. Firstly, a child who is focused on school work should not have allowance, for the reason that money may distract the child from their studies. For example, if a child has money, they might decide to spend it on computer games, going out with their friends or going shopping. Secondly, children are not mature, and may be vulnerable to some social evils and could easily go astray. They are not able to distinguish right from wrong. Their pocket money could be used in playing games, gambling or even drug-taking. Thirdly, children might compare their allowance in school with others, which may cause social and psychological problems.From above discussion, if I am asked to make a choice I would not hesitate to side with the first argument that children should be given an allowance. However, the parents should teach their children that money is hard-earned, and then set examples in order to give them guidance of how to use their money correctly.谢谢大家了