高一英语改错

One afternoon my father and (went) fishing on a riverside .We found the water was (so) dirty that we could not see (the) bottom.We saw some rubbish (and) (dead) fish floating on the water (as) well .That afternoon ,my father and I caught only a (small) fish .Why did fish in the river die ?That was because (delete the "of" here) a lot of factories along the river always poured (its) waste water (delete the "at" here) and rubbish into the river .In this way ,the water got (polluted).Thus, most of the fish in the river was killed.there you go, i kindda fixed that for ya...you know, if i were you, i'd dump that article in your teacher's face and tell him not to misguide his students anymore. the whole writing's pointless and sounds totally like Chinese...i can't believe the teacher choose such garbage as students' homework...真的,这文章太坑人了,哪有这么说话的啊,简直不说人话嘛. 给孩子留作业起码弄个正规英文读物啊,这样的东西读多了还怎么学正经英语啊.

作答如下：1）去掉a（因为strong此处用作谓语）；2）Congratulation改为Congratulations（这是惯用短语，表示祝福）；3）specially改为special（此处该用形容词，而不是副词）；4）trapping改为trapped（此处该是完成时，而不该是进行时）；5）rescuing改为rescue（go to do sth.）；6）shocking改为shocked（be+shocked 表示被震惊到了）；7）even改为as（even if是即使的意思，于此处不通，as if才是好像的意思）；8）去掉in（was已作为谓语，in多余了）；9）injuring改为injured（表示形容词）； 希望能帮到你。

1.Some students don't like talking(to talk) about their parents 2.often as （if） their parents love them very much.Are you 3.going on well with your parents?You and your parents (此句正确）4.will be very happy if you（r） can be friends.Here are some 5.way（s） to have a good talk with them.Find a good time to 6.talk,like when you are eating dinner,going out for（a） walk 7.and watching TV.Tell them something you're interested 8.in or ask them about their lives when they are（were） young 9.They love ti talk about our（their) past!Meet them face to face and 10.listen to them carefully.Be honesty（honest),and your parents will trust you more.

1. 改正：He succeeded in the competition，which made each of us happy. 或：He succeeded in the competition，making each of us happy.解释：不能用两个动词同时做一个简单句的谓语。要么把句子变成复合句，要么把某个动词变成非谓语形式。2. 改正：The problem is that more and more young people are getting into the habit of smoking.解释：表语从句的that不能省略。3. 改正：Whether he is an engineer is unkown. 解释：主语从句的“是否”只能用whether,不能用if.4. 改正：What she wants to know is whether she should attend the conference. 解释：表语从句的“是否”用whether，不能用if。5. 改正：At the meeting he raised a question whether the project would be cancelled.解释：同位语从句的“是否”用whether, 不能用if。 6. 改正：It depends on whether it's going to rain.解释：介词后的宾语从句的“是否”用whether, 不能用if. 7. 改正：We expressed the hope that the Browns would come to China again.解释：同位语从句的引导词t不用which用that.8. 改正：The reason why he failed in the exam was that he was too careless. 解释：用表语从句来解释原因时，引导词用that, 不用because.9. 改正：Whoever comes to visit the exhibition is welcome.解释：no matter不能引导主语从句, 但是whoever可以。 10. 改正：What he needs is enough time and what I need are enough books. 解释：what引导的主语从句，动词的数应该根据事实来判断。

1.He succeed in the competition [which] made each of us happy. 2.The problem is [that] more and more young people are getting into the habit of smoking. 3.[whether] he is an engineer is unkown. 4.What she wants to know is [whether] she should attend the conference. 5.At the meeting he raised a question [that] the project would be concelled. 6.It depends [that] if it's going to rain. 7.We expressed the hope [that] the Browns would come to China again. 8.The reason [that] why he failed in the exam was became he was too careless. 9.[whoever]comes to visit the exhibition is welcome. 10.What he needs [is]enough time and what i need is enough books.