温馨英语口语

give you a sweety night!

Good morning, teacher! My name is XXX . My favorite objects are the violin, books and computers. My hobbies are playing the violin, listening to music, singing, playing on the computer. 我最喜欢的物品最好成绩用objects,而且是多个，用复数。另外，我的爱好应该用My hobbies,希望能帮到你，祝更上一层楼O(∩_∩)O

give you a cozy night.

温馨 warm and fragrant 字典上的答案.我觉得如果单纯地翻译, 就翻译成fragrant或pleasant, comfortable这样的词就好了. 或者是homely feelings.

我觉得你的文章写得有的地方有些啰嗦，“我最喜欢的事是小提琴、书籍和电脑,我喜欢拉小提琴、听音乐、唱歌、玩电脑。”为什么不把它提得更精练一点呢，比如：我最喜欢做的事就是拉小提琴，读书，玩电脑和听音乐，有时还会唱几句。My favorite thing to do is play the violin, reading, playing computer and listen to music and sometimes sing a song. 还有就是“big family”不好听，不如“Caring family”温馨的家庭