雅思考试写作

2015年雅思写作真题范文（2月14日）：TASK2:The use of mobile phone in certain places is just as antisocial as *** oking. do you think mobile should be banned like *** oking？解析：这道考题应该算是比较简单的，一是话题（手机使用）本身不难，是考生们所熟悉的。

另外，观点也应该容易得出。凡事必有利弊，科技运用的主动权一直都掌握在人们手中，人不能因噎废食，科技产品如小小的智能手机只是工具，能否给人类带来利取决于人们如何去使用它们。

这里想说的是文章的布局，从剑桥官方范文来看，大多数有明显倾向性的文章除了让步段以外，都给出了两个支持段。相比市面上所谓的高分范文或名师们给出的四段式，个人感觉此类结构更合理，有侧重点，说服力上也略胜一筹。

2015年雅思写作真题范文欣赏：Mobile phones are very popular among modern people as they greatly facilitate their daily life. However some people think the wide use of mobile phones causes problems as well and theyshould be of this believe that like *** oking which pollutes air, the use of mobile phones causes another kind of pollution, and that is noise. Inconsiderate use of them can be quite annoying. For example, loud conversations on mobile phones in public interrupt the pleasure of a quiet talk with friends. Besides, using mobile phones while driving can be a distraction for drivers and considered as a main contributor to road injuries. What is worse, excessive use of mobile phones can cause damage to people's health. Particularly, too much exposure to the tiny screen can be detrimental to young children's , the important role of mobile phones in modern life cannot be denied. First, for the majority of users, mobile phones provide them with easy and convenient munication that nothing else can offer. Compared with letters which take a couple of days or even weeks to reach the recipient, calls or short text messages via mobile phones enable users to stay connected with their social circles in a more efficient , new phones with multi-functions are constantly pushed to the market due to the application of new technology and they add more color to the dull routine. For instance, *** artphone users now can share interesting photos or their thoughts on a certain topic wherever they go. Also, convenience is important in modern life and the updated functions meet such need. New *** artphones enable users to pay all kinds of bills or make shopping payments effortlessly, saving time for work or leisure. Unlike laptops or other advanced hi-tech devices, mobile phones are *** aller, lighter and easier to carry, therefore they gain tremendous popularity among people who needs to travel frequently and keep in touch with outside conclusion, unlike *** oking which is definitely harmful to *** okers and the environment, mobile phones can benefit people if they are properly used. Therefore I do not think it is advisable to ban mobile phones, but guidelines about how to use them in a civilized way are essential.。

《我的奇思幻想》…暑copy假来临了，我和妈妈打算去上海海迪士尼游玩，我多么希望在那里住一宿。

这可需要一笔不菲的费用呢！对了，我可以发明一栋飞bai在天空的房子啊！？！正好还不用花火车票钱了！真是一个两全其美的办法！它和农村的房子没什么两样，只是它的两侧长了一对巨大无比的翅膀，这能够让它在天空中飞翔，家里的所du有电器都是太阳能，连冰箱电视，洗衣机都是太阳能的，这栋房子不仅能飞上天，而且他平均每分钟行驶100千米，从集宁到上海迪士尼用不了半小时，因为房子可以在天zhi空中快速行驶，所以大大节省了我们的时间，同时免去了舟车劳顿之苦。到哪里只需要交门票钱，这下坐车的钱，和住酒店的钱就可以省了，这就是我发明，天空中的dao房子，有了这栋房子，大家就可以带着自己的家人出去游玩了。

很多同学把精e69da5e887aa3233363533331力放在写作的结构或内容上，这是致命的错误。雅思作文只要做到结构清晰，内容合理，不要要太变态或太强辞夺理即可。真正决定分数的是语言！！！考官比较侧重两方面：句型结构和词汇。

句型结构方面：要有复杂句，如从句（这是基本的，6分的作文还是要的），非谓语动词作定语、状语、独立结构（这是7,8分要的），倒装句（7,8分要的），强调句（6分的也可以用用，比较好用），被动语态（这个地球人都要会用），同位语（7,8要的，6分么也可以用用），插入语（7,8分要的，感觉会很好）等等。

词汇：中国学生往往对词汇的理解有个误区！！！总觉得，词用的越难越好，这是大错特错！！！去看看剑桥系列从书所提供的例文，没有一篇考官写的例文是用了很多难词的。词汇主要是强调多样性，即表达同一个意思，不要重复同样的表达方式。比如：要说某某事很重要，第一次如果用了important，第二次就不能再说了，可以换些表达，如significant, of great importance, have priority over。等等，这样表达的方式就多样了，考官就开心了，分数就高了。

平时多积累一些短语结构和词汇，我看见新东方在线的论坛上就有不少实用的资源和帖子，培养自己的语感，这样写作文的时候也能比较流畅的写出来。

do you agree or disagree的雅思作文题目，最好是要有一个让步观点.对于每一个观点段落，可以在该段的开头就写明一个主题句，清晰的阐明该段大意，当然也可以在结尾的时候写一个总结句，一个点明段落大意的主题句或者总结句可以为作文加分.discuss both views and give your own opinoin的题目，每个view段落里面写几个分论点是可以根据自己进行调整的，如果把分论点都写在一个段落里面太长的话，可以通过自然的连接词换一段写，这些连接词类似于：however、then、so等等.是要先表明观点，表明观点，不需要像前面两段那样复杂的论证，但是也要做一个简单的说明.cause and effect的题目，每一段写一个观点即可，如果观点过多，可以适当将两个观点作为一个段落来写.有时间多到“雅思救星”上面看看，多练习、多看范文，对提高自己的雅思写作能力也是非常有帮助的.。

朗阁海外考试研究中心 赵平江说到雅思写作，很多考生会不约而同地想到词汇和语法。

的确，在写作的四项评分标准中，这两项指标占据了半壁江山。对于前者，考生们往往不敢怠慢，备考过程中的很大一部分时间和精力都是花在词汇积累上的，而对于后者，却因为单调、枯燥而常常被有意无意地忽视。

实际上，“磨刀不误砍柴工”，只有把“语法”这把刀磨得亮亮的，才有可能连词成句，连句成段，又快又好地完成雅思写作任务。然而在平时的教学过程中，我们发现，语法问题成为了不少考生提高雅思写作成绩的绊脚石，甚至一些英语水平相对不错的考生或是为了追求句子的复杂性或是由于粗心大意也会出现类似的问题，因此我们整理了雅思写作中常见的语法问题，以期提醒广大考生注意。

鉴于篇幅关系，对于时态混乱、主谓不一致、及物不及物误用、可数不可数单复数错误等问题，这里就不一一赘述了，本文将主要从句子结构层面展开探讨。1、串句串句是不用连词或标点而把两个（或以上）独立的句子串在一起的错误表达。

有些串句是不用任何标点间隔两个甚至更多的句子；有些串句是在该用句号时滥用逗号，忽略了逗号本身没有连接句子功能的原则。No one can deny the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with is a general discussion there days over education in many colleges and institutes, one of the questions under debate is whether education is a lifetime study.修改和避免串句错误的常见方法：①用句号把原句分成两个独立的句子；②用连词连接两个句子；③用分号连接两个句子。

如：No one can deny the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem, so the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with is a general discussion there days over education in many colleges and institutes; one of the questions under debate is whether education is a lifetime 、破句破句是把不完整的句子当作独立的句子来写时发生的错误。以下是常见的几个破句的例子：Students should be encouraged to take part-time job. Because it will benefit students and their family, even the society as a whole.点评：从属连词引起的破句。

常见的从属连词有after,unless, even if, even though ,since , before , when (whenever),because, if, who(whoever),while, as (as if ), which(whichever), although , so that, where(wherever), until, that等。像because这样的从属连词开头的从句是不能单独存在的，它依赖于另一个句子方能使意义完整，也就是说单独的从句本身就是破句。

修改后：Students should be encouraged to take part-time job because it will benefit students and their family, even the society as a large number of people think that they had pleted their education when they finished their schooling. Not realizing that a person's education is a most important aspect of his life.点评：分词引起的破句。当分词出现在一个短语或句子的开头时常常会产生破句，而这样的破句往往缺少主语或谓语动词的一部分。

修改后：A large number of people think that they had pleted their education when they finished their schooling. They fail to realize that a person's education is a most important aspect of his travel has given rise to large numbers of employment opportunities. For example, retail, hospitality and transportation.点评：增加细节引起的破句。往往以下面的词语开头：for example, also, except, such as, including, especially, among, like.修改后：International travel has given rise to large numbers of employment opportunities in retail, hospitality and sociologists point out that rural emigrants are putting pressure on population control. And also threatening to take already scarce city jobs.点评：缺少主语的破句。

用and之类连词打头的短语或句子居多，可通过使破句依附于前面的句子或加上主语的方式进行更正。修改后：Many sociologists point out that rural emigrants are putting pressure on population control and also threatening to take already scarce city 、错误的平行结构所谓平行结构，就是指两个（或以上）意思并列的成份（包括单词、词组、从句和句子）在写作时要用同等的语法形式表达，并保证逻辑上的一致，否则就破坏了其平行结构。

①错误的并列In order to attract tourists, a lot of artificial facilities have been built and which have certain unfavorable effects on the environment.点评：and who/and which 结构是考生所犯的错误中最常见但最严重的一种，因为它导致从句与主句间一种不合逻辑的关系。修改后：In order to attract tourists, a lot of artificial facilities have been built, which have certain unfavorable effects on the environment.②一系列平行结构上的不正确使用Many people choose air transportation because it is fast, offers convenience and it is not 。

参加过雅思考试的同学都深有体会，跟许多烤鸭们一样视雅思作文为雅思考试中的难中之难。

有此感的原因是，即使有观点，看得懂题目，却找不到合适的句子来表达，也无法写出高分的文章。所以雅思培训 查看更多雅思培训的内容>>查看雅思培训课程>>申请雅思培训试听课程>>的专家们为各位雅思考生们总结了大作文的必备句式，让你轻松搞定雅思写作。

以下是雅思考试短文写作中使用率最高、覆盖面最广的基本句式，每组句式的功能相同或相似，考生可根据自己的情况选择其中的1-2个，做到能够熟练正确地仿写或套用。在这里雅思辅导老师需要提醒考生们，盲目的套用句式是不可取的，必须首先做到对这些句式的理解和熟悉，经过大量的练习，才能轻松自如地应用在自己的作文中。

一、表示原因 1、There are three reasons for this. 2、The reasons for this are as follows. 3、The reason for this is obvious. 4、The reason for this is not far to seek. 5、The reason for this is that。 6、We have good reason to believe that。

例如： There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life. Firstly, people's living standard has been greatly improved. Secondly, most people are well paid, and they can afford what they need or like. Last but not least, more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life. 注：如考生写第一个句子没有把握，可将其改写成两个句子。如：Great changes have taken place in our life. There are three reasons for this. 这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。

二、表示好处 1、It has the following advantages. 2、It does us a lot of good. 3、It benefits us quite a lot. 4、It is beneficial to us. 5、It is of great benefit to us. 例如： Books are like friends. They can help us know the world better, and they can open our minds and widen our horizons. Therefore, reading extensively is of great benefit to us. 三、表示坏处 1、It has more disadvantages than advantages. 2、It does us much harm. 3、It is harmful to us. 例如： However, everything divides into o. Television can also be harmful to us. It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television. 四、表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能 1、It is important(necessary, difficult, convenient, possible、for *** . to do sth. 2、We think it necessary to do sth. 3、It plays an important role in our life. 例如： Computers are now being used everywhere, whether in the government, in schools or in business. Soon, puters will be found in every home, too. We have good reason to say that puters are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age. 五、表示措施 1、We should take some effective measures. 2、We should try our best to overe (conquer、the difficulties. 3、We should do our utmost in doing sth. 4、We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced、with. 例如： The housing problem that we are confronted with is being more and more serious. Therefore, we must take some effective measures to solve it. 六、表示变化 1、Some changes have taken place in the past five years. 2、A great change will certainly be produced in the world's munications. 3、The puter has brought about many changes in education. 例如： Some changes have taken place in people's diet in the past five years. The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek. Nowadays, more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein, and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins. 七、表示事实、现状 1、We cannot ignore the fact that。 2、No one can deny the fact that。

3、There is no denying the fact that。 4、This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in. 5、However, that's not the case. 例如： We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollution. To solve these problems, we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution. The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment. 八、表示比较 1、Compared with A, B。

2、I prefer to read rather than watch TV. 3、There is a striking contrast beeen them. 例如： Compared with cars, bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable. Firstly, they do not consume natural resources of petroleum. Secondly, they do not cause the pollution problem. Last but not least, they contribute to people's health by giving them due physical exercise. 九、表示数量 1、It has increased (decreased、from。to。

2、The population in this city has now increased (decreased、to 800,000. 3、The output of July in this factory increased by 15% pared with that of January. 例如： With the improvement of the living standard, the 。

雅思写作对作文的字数要求是很严格的，小作文不少于150字，大作文不少于250个字。

作文要求只给了下限，很多考生就觉得，写多一些就可以了。但是并不是多写一点就会扣分，也不是刚刚好这么多字数就是最好的。

对于雅思作文字数分析如下： 重复问题的字数是不算的。因此千万不要照抄整个题目，除非原题中有一两个无法找其他词代替的，或者说是核心词，那么可以保留。

所有词都算数，但是雅思作文千万要杜绝缩写词，那样太不正式，一旦写了必扣分！ 时间就是生命！别在考场上一个字一个字地数了，按行来计算！写作并不是字数越多越好，如果你可以在规定时间内写到300个字以上，除非你的英语相当好！不然的话还是花点时间来组织全文或者检查错误吧！毕竟质量还是比数量重要的。最佳安排：小作文 150-170字 大作文 250-275字 。

写作这个部分建议一定要找老师帮你批改，不能闭门造车。除了基本的单词语法错误，写作逻辑和结构方面也需要老师的建议来帮助提高，否则作文在短时间内是很难进步的。

雅思写作有四项评分标准，就是写作任务完成情况、连贯与衔接、词汇丰富程度、语法多样性及准确性。

也就是写的时候要主旨清晰、逻辑合理、框架清晰，最好同时可以注意运用一些书面用语，保证词汇的丰富度。所以我们备考时要积累一些短语，用作同义替换用。因为如果通篇同一种事物只用一个词来形容就达不到作文的词汇量要求。

写作部分的词汇积累可以分类记忆，很多人记了很多单词，真的写作文的时候，逻辑连接词却还是because、however。

所以我们在积累写作词汇的时候，可以把它们整理一下，可以分为连接词顺序词等等。比如以前见过的因果词汇就可以整理到连词模块里，可以用as a consequence，或者是hence等，让你在写作的时候能够同义替换。

考试时要保证语法和拼写正确，哪怕用小词、短句也可以，每篇再加上几个闪光的词句。平时背的词汇、句式、模板一定要在练习中有意识的用上，这样考试才不会临场失忆。

845480066，软文写作没有一定的知识功底是写不出来好文章的，我是找他写的，最前面就是扣维来的。

正题： ESSAY分为三部分： 一篇学术性论文当中，这三部分是必须要有的，同理在考试中才能得高分。 那么什么是introduction呢，之前看书说是把题目用替换词带入照抄，后来发现这是傻瓜式写法，对于要求写作7分以上的同学并不适用。真正的introduction是“present your viewpoint”那么怎样来present呢？继续。 第一步：lead-in background information即导入背景信息。 看这个例子： Some people think visitors to other countries should imitate local custom and behaviors. Some people degree. They think the host country should welcome culture different. Discuss the two views，and give your own opinion.. 这个论文题目里， tourism 就是一个背景信息，所以我们introduction里第一句就该来介绍或者叫导入背景信息，即tourism的信息。例如： Tourism has became an indispensable part in our modern world.或者Tourism is gradually considered to be a hot topic 第二步：narrow down information即从大背景信息里提出你要去论证的方面。还是上面给出的题目，你要narrow down出来的就是：“people show more concern to their two views. Some of them think visitors to others nations should imitate local custom and behaviors，but others argue that the host nation should welcome various cultures” 第三步：your viewpoint即给出你自己的立场。例如上题你就可以说：“As far as I am concerned，I side with the former” 【Some people think visitors to other countries should imitate local custom and behaviors. Some people degree. They think the host country should welcome culture different. Discuss the two views，and give your own opinion.】 Introduction： “Tourism is gradually considered to be a hot topic. People show more concern to their two views. Some of them think visitors to others nations should imitate local custom and behaviors，but others argue that the host nation should welcome various cultures. As far as I am concerned，I side with the latter.” 这里要注意，第一步和第二步都是general statement，都是题目已经给你的，只需要你用学术性的文字合理输入就好了，但是第三步是thesis statement，这才是最重要的，是你对这篇论文的观点，也是你接下来要引出Body的关键句，承前启后。。恩。。就这么理解吧。 关于BODY部分，正反两方面都要提及比较好，一边倒往往写着写着就没话了，尤其是在考试中一紧张反应会慢点。。这部分大家参考十天写作这本书就好了。尤其是后面关于各个话题的好句子。段落基本就是2-3段。这里需要强调的一点就是，一定要注意句子的连贯性，就是连接词的运用，承接，转折，句子长短搭配，在用词方面尽量多用学术性更强的词汇。Important可以用significant代替等等。嘿嘿，大家都知道的吧，我就不废话了。 再说下conclusion部分。 1. summary 2. idea Summary就是对你body两部分的一个总结。Idea就是你自己的观点，就是retell your viewpoint如果还是拿上面那个题目来说的，假如你是正方面论证的，那么可以这么写： “From what has been discussed above，we may safely draw the conclusion that the host country should welcome culture different. Though some people think that visitors to others nations should imitate local custom and behaviors，I still would like to support the former.” 以上就是大作文写作的基本框架，最后再说下写好作文的四个基本要点吧。 Understand the way to write Appreciate the language Remember the language Reflect/Use the language